This could be sexy. But with the excessive lengths of detail the artist went to, all the extra parts on either female main just look like pointless loads of fat, or muscles that in all reality could be used but for some reason aren't. Velma looks like she could kick something into next year with how her upper leg looks, and Daphne looks like she could crush something between her thighs and kill it without a single pause for thought.
Dial back the details next time, artist.

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pg. 24 wtf the demon looks like fucking quagmire from family guy

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Yup definitely some potential here but needs a lot of refinement.

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Page 7 is definitely a dickbutt.

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Yeah, details here were TOO done.
Had they been dialed back, this would be MUCH more arousing.
Don't get me wrong, I enjoy seeing a mummy with a dick doing Velma and a witch with Daphne.
I see some GREAT potential, Jaegerbite, but a lot of work is needed.
Also, I'm tagging this 'futanari' seeing that Witch is packing a dick between her legs.

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GLAD TO SEE YOU BACK!

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The artwork is tolerable due to the detailed wording and scenarios.

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I really want to see where this goes.

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