I prefer the prime mover stories where they manage to resist a bit, but seeing something new at all was welcome.
I guess my biggest gripe is how "bimbo" or "dolled up" means uglier... the characters are often uglier after the mind control. Aside from a lack of curves MC was the prettiest in this story, until the mind control. If she had just been given a bit more curves she would've been gorgeous, but she was also given a troll face.