Looks like some pages are out of order...page 1 is a flash forward right? So only two pages in the end are misplaced, it seems.
Anyway awesome story, classic walking in guy fapping with development. Also 1 page and half of eating pussy, not outweighted by several pages of blowjob. Neat.
Please, for the love of god could someone translate Moonlight's works? I wouldn't mind paying commission for a few of the 7 or 8 (with Eli) that still need to be translated