Why have you made a half-assed attempt at rewriting this into impregnation?

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@Resonae: Why do you call it a rewrite? We need examples of texthanged for this to be tagged/renamed

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To be fair, the raw doesn't have the tag. So one between the raw and this is incorrectly tagged.

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As far as I checked it's not a rewrite for the most part but there's some extra focus on impregnation added that wasn't in the original. Some examples:
page 16: original "watashi mo" (me too) was translated as "do it inside"
page 17: original "...un" (...yeah) was translated as "...yeah, oji-san's seed"

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Agree with Resonae.

Page 5, he mentions, "Suguha-chan, You're proactive today?".
Her response in the raw is "Yeah, when I wear these clothes..." and the translation says "Actually, today is my da-" implying it's her dangerous day.
Bottom left says "W-what? What is it?"

Page 6, in the raw she says "It's fine!"

Page 8, bottom left should read "Let's do it here too, okay?"

Page 16, translation says "Do it inside", raw reads "M-me too!" (Responding to him saying he's about to cum".

Page 17, translator added tiny text about seed. Doesn't appear in raw.

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Suguha is such a whore.......good for her :D

Very nice, thanks for all the effort and sharing, good work :)

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Should be reclassified.

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This uploader doesn't even know how to put his uploads to the other language category... even if you exclude all languages but jap, his will still come up on the list.

Last edited on 11 January 2020, 11:16.

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How is this NTR? Is she fucking her brother in the anime or books? I thought the Asuna one won.

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