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(MILLION FESTIV@L!! 2) [Garimpeiro (Mame Denkyuu)] Futari no Prologue (The IDOLM@STER MILLION LIVE!) [English]

(ミリフェス2) [Garimpeiro (まめでんきゅう)] ふたりのプロローグ (アイドルマスターミリオンライブ！) [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2020-01-09 15:01
Parent:1544239
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Language:English  TR
File Size:87.26 MiB
Length:23 pages
Favorited:828 times
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Posted on 09 January 2020, 15:01 by:   sywdddd    PM
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Posted on 01 January 2020, 05:15 by:   dfgghgf    PM
Score +30
great book but kinda questionable translations/typesetting
Posted on 01 January 2020, 05:58 by:   dewa_anon    PM
Score +20
wow this translation and typesetting is shit as fuck
Posted on 09 January 2020, 15:32 by:   Juggernaut Santa    PM
Score +95
@dewa_anon: shit is a big claim, there seems to be some cleaning and leveling, it doesn't look THAT bad, come on.

@sywdddd: I see you updated, but typesetting still needs fixing. Tell Konstantin too :D
Align center the text as a first thing. Make the text slightly smaller, so the bubble isn't cramped.

About TL, I'll give it a look now to see if there's something I can suggest. Gimme a sec.
edit: welp, the whole thing is written quite weirdly, I would literally have to paraphrase everything. It's not that the translation is wrong (for what I can tell), the english is wonky.
Posted on 09 January 2020, 23:21 by:   sywdddd    PM
Score +57
@Juggernaut_Santa: thanks for kind advice. Some may notice that I also made Chinese TL of this one as my mother tongue is Chinese. When I saw this one has no English TL, I gave my first try. If native English speakers can help I would appreciate it a lot.

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