Hi there!

Just recently released (yesterday), I found this little intriguing story and decided to translate it.

Standard Disclaimer:
This is by no mean a perfect translation, typesetting or cleaning. If somebody wants to take it upon him/herself to update the translation or provide a version with better typesetting and cleaning, go for it. Neither english not japanese are my native language and my translation is supported by a couple of different machine translation tools, so it might not be correct all the time. However, I think I did a decent job this time and the dialogue isn't really that complicated anyway.

If you base your own translation of this chapter on mine (e.g. italian, russian, polish, spanish), please credit me by putting a link to this page somewhere in the description of your translation.

Enjoy!

Is this yuri? And females only?

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Great and dark story; is there a first part? I'm want to see the brain parasite take over the evil rich girl.

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Sadly, there's no first part at least on this page. Checking the artist's content, it seems like he doesn't draw a lot of full stories, but most of his content is this kind of possession.

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That is freaking terrifying

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Is there more? I love spooky stuff like this, reminds me of Date.

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Great piece, thank you for translating!

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Considering the author was doing some GB stuff I am going to assume the one who possessed her is a guy.

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Oh man this was too short. I was just getting into it.

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excellent, is there some more?

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@greed2
Nah it's not yuri and it's not female only knowing this author.
It's so sad that such idiotic genre was even created, can't draw normal yuri so they had to insert a guy into it somehow to make it shitty, it's even worse than idiotic ffm threesomes "yuri".
Sadly the tags this site uses don't allow to add a male tag here which should be existing like male soul/mind etc, male ghost tag already exist so it should be possible.
Cause if person reads such story they can't know who is doing the possession and if it's a guy then females only tag shouldn't be used, similair with gender bender issue.
It's so simple.

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@kitsuneH
While I would certainly agree that male possessing female characters and such should invalidate a females only tag, in this specific example, it isn't made clear whether it was originally of a different gender, at least not within the story itself.
Can't have proper yuri at all, most of the time. Why does some guy/monster/whatever have to be added into yuri all the time? I don't see yaoi getting one obligatory girl every second gallery. Sometimes I wish people would bother using the bisexual tag instead of tagging such things yuri.
The tagging system could use some serious updates and additions/simplifications to make things clearer, but sadly, that most likely won't happen. Tags are a mess and will stay that way. Feel free to start a thread about this on the forum, only to be told that it isn't significant enough to change tag definitions or whatever.

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0.5分，最多了

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Interesting, but too short. Looks like starting point for bigger story.

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This could have a male:gender bender tag, but the possessor is not stated, so just leave the gender stuff out.
Also the emphasis is on possession and mind stealing, not on that 2 pages of groping.
So really mind control and possession tags are enough for this short story.
Only tag what's stated in the story.

In the end, just remember to keep the tags useful. e.g. Yuri seekers certainly won't appreciate your yuri tag. While the system certainly doesn't cover every plots, it's acceptable here in my opinion.

ps. you're thinking females-only wrongly, it doesn't equal to yuri, it simply means female characters only. So one can search females-only + possession to get this specific story that doesn't show the possession process, but instead what happens after.
ps2. I won't comment on the state of yuri plots or if possession is an idiotic genre.

edit1. changed yuri lovers to yuri seekers. I never said yuri lovers would dislike this plot.

Last edited on 02 February 2020, 10:39.

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Speak for yourselves, as a yuri the fan I like it. Besides, idea of souls having gender is simply too stupid, specially to use as a reason for putting male-related tag

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