No redraws and lots of untranslated bubbles, meh.

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She is so cute...

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a haughty tsundere actually crying when disturbed at sex and out of jealousy
OMG this doujin is so cu-
HNNGGGGGG

RAW:https://e-hentai.org/g/1553119/c89558e757/

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No redraws, just white painted over the text in the transparent bubbles.
No translated moans; I know they're pain in the ass to typeset, but the cleaning of the bubbles here would have been really easy and most of them could have been typed in a regular font or nice font with a bit of handwritten feeling. If you're searching for good free fonts check sites dafont.com or whatfontis.com.
And we have the typical beginner mistake of using e-hentai's downscaled 1280s for editing.

Q: How can you download full res imges from e-hentai?
A: e-hentai offers 3 methods to download full res images: a.) torrent download (if available, WARNING torrents don't always contain the latest or full res version of the gallery)
b.) Archive Download (click on "Archive Download" and "Download Original Archive"; e-hentai account and GP or Credits required)
c.) the "Download Original" link at the bottom of each individual image (if you don't want to download the complete gallery; e-hentai account and GP or Credits required)

Q: Do I have to upload all the different sized images e-hentai might display on the users screen depending on his settings?
A: No, you just have to upload original sized images. All other sized versions will be created by e-hentai.

Forgot to mention: At least the typesetting is okay. Someone made his homework there. It's just missing points. There is ?,! and ... but no . that you need in western languages.

Last edited on 26 January 2020, 20:53.

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Page 7, bottom left panel
Boy do those legs look wrong

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>ragnel alondite

Meltlilith is a mooninite from Fate/EXTRA's Moon Cell and that's how her legs look.

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@Ratch

Im pretty sure he means that in the last panel it looks weird how her left leg passes from above Gudas arm to her right side.

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Melt is simply the best.

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Really wish people would learn to tag stuff properly. She's flat chested, not a loli. She's technically Passionlip"s older sister even.

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