Hi everyone, I rate the translation at 80-90 in my native language, but there is a problem, English is not my native language. Therefore, when an English-speaking person will read, errors in sentences will be found immediately. I mean, such cases in which an English-speaking person would never say and etc.. So I need your help. This link contains fonts and psd (https://mega.nz/#F!mehilSzK!JeLdexxMok8SI7766zhVaw).
Hope my shit is readably.
Sorry for any inconvenience caused.

I'd rather have a flawed translation than no translation at all. If possible, consider finding a native English friend to proof read your translation before posting.

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Not gonna lie, the hentai logic of to keep going is always a chuckle.

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What's the point of even translating into a language you don't understand?
You're all just white knighting a bad translation.

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like @sdpfsj said, i rather have something flawed than nothing at all

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Drug Classification
Name: Smegma
Street name: Dick Cheese
Component: Combination of shed skin cells, skin oils, and moisture
Effect: Sudden and uncontrollable lust after a few ingestion
Withdrawal Effect: sudden frigidity when seeing penis without smegma

Imagine being in the hentailand and smegma is a controlled subtance

RAW:https://e-hentai.org/g/1552976/f54a58ad8d/

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People hating on translations is why we can never have nice stuff.

You guys are on a fucking pirate website, stop being picky

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Poor Riamu, she tends to suffer a lot in many of her pieces...
The hardships of a egotistical girl...
Thanks for sharing

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How are they supposed how to translate and edit doujins if they don't get to practice?

Let people be. If you don't like the translation, commission your own.

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There is a difference between a translation and translated words being thrown together. Getting someone else to beta read it is not that difficult and saves everyone time and effort. Can't say how valid the translation in terms of Japanese is, but in terms of English, this is pretty bad. You're supposed to get the practice before posting.

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"Saves everyone time and effort" you mean the 20 minutes and 50 kcal you would've spent masturbating, or...?

Anyhow, bloodvlad clearly doesn't have someone else to beta read it, seeing as they're asking for help in the uploader comment. Maybe lend them a hand if you'd like a better translation.

This work was done on a whim and entirely for free. There was literally no harm done here at all.

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Riamu are a fucking retard

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