I love his art and his other comics are gorgeous... so when I see this, I feel like if the author could gave himself 2 more pages, the transition between 1 and 2 would have feel more smooth and not so "RUSH TO THAT DICK YO!" but I bet he just focus on his other ongoing comic and maybe he did this to distance some time off the other one so the plot is not really necessary. Still...
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