This was doing with Google Translate and a lot of proofreading to make the sentences make sense.
I hope that this doesn't deter someone from doing a proper translation of this in the future, since it deserves one.

Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/1571011/e21f9a7f40/

Edit 02/27/20: Revised a whole bunch of lines, fixed some typos, and added SFX.
This really should've been the original gallery, sorry for jumping the gun on the original.

Still a really good translation regardless of how it's done the proof reading is really good. Good job!

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The effort is appreciated

Most people won't like the fact that it's machine translated,
but apart from being a little stiff and some lines that should be rewritten, it's not too bad.

For example on P29 "... you have a bad mouth" should be ".. you have such a potty mouth" or "...you have such a sharp tongue"
If something sounds really strange it probably means it's a phrase that can't be translated in a literal sense.
Feel free to rewrite those in more natural english

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Poor Mako only had a background appearance and doesn’t even get screwed.

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Now with extra hypnosis!!!

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I want more Watamote doujins in english.

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Thank you for the translation

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这逼画得有丶诱人

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YURI-CHAN!

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Super nice, anything/everything by Eromazun is great stuff, thanks a lot for all the effort and sharing :)

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It should probably say machine translation in the title, but yeah this isn't bad.

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Ree no teacher

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p7: typo on reddened
p9: "Cum!" missing (which might lead to a rephrase of p10 depending on translator)
p12: subject missing → "Do you want me to stop?" (which also might lead to a rephrase of the following line, but it's fine)
p14: extraneous "is" after "coiling"
p15: from behind (behind what?) → from deep
p16: "I'll be mating with you" → *I'm gonna hit you up!"
p17: it's imperative, like "get pregnant!"
p19: that's creative (there's not really an implication in the original text)
p20: "And! I've hypnotized Kato-san, too."
p22: same as above but for Nemoto, but I can understand if it's a stylistic choice.
p24: along the same lines as p16.
p28: 甲乙つけがたい is an expression, "hard to tell which one's superior"
p31: "I heard you liked Kuroki" and "So this is what Uchi-san looks like when you lift/move away her bangs"
p33: appreciate normalfags here w
p35: "is tiring" → "They're hooked on"

Actually this is getting too long so I'll quit here. Good intentions, good cleaning/redrawing, but the result was still subpar.

> I hope that this doesn't deter someone from doing a proper translation of this in the future, since it deserves one.
I think we all know what happened here.

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