My fan conclusion of Studiofa's unfinished 18-page comic H.E.L.G.A. All characters and scenarios belong to StudioFA, this continuation is an entirely unofficial fan effort.

Since this comic was left unfinished in 2015 and the original artist has seemingly dropped out, I've always felt it needed a more solid buttoning up. This is my modest attempt to do so and pay homage to an artistic inspiration of mine. I worked hard to reflect the original style, which was a stretch for me but I kind of love the results. Hope y'all do too!

Jesus christ what a horror show.

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Press “F” enter the tank

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You're a coward for cutting out before the robot rape

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I'm glad someone decided to finish it, but you've completely failed to understand or cater to the fetish the original centered around, which was weight gain through gluttony and belly stuffing. The best pages on the original were 5, 8, 11, and 13. Why? Because those pages showcased the forced (and grudgingly accepted) gluttony and it's consequences. Her nude body and her packed, taut gut took front and center stage. All the other pages were just cycles of posturing and plot that existed solely to keep looping back around into the "belly stuffed tight" result. Where is that here? You have exactly ONE page that only SOMEWHAT features that, which is page 8, and even then it's somewhat hard to tell. You've completely axed the gluttony, and the eating and stuffing and tight round bellies are gone. They happen off stage. She's just a balloon of lard that you arbitrarily inflate between a series of scene cuts and jumps that gloss over what the people who liked the original actually liked it for.

Sure, there's crossover between between stuffing and bbw, quite a bit actually. I freely admit that. BBW and Weight Gain are both somewhat vague and subjective tags. But even if the tags are vague, that doesn't mean a pre-existing work is vague. The reason people accepted the Craving Control fan continuation after adjectivenouncombo went nuclear is specifically because the people who threw their hat into the ring understood what the point of Craving Control was, which was cartoonish gluttony and an endlessly expanding belly. If someone had come in and just made Lalia a giant whoopie cushion of lard and called it a "tribute" or "continuation," people would have called them out on it, and rightfully so. You've effectively changed what the fetish and focus of this original work was, and you're trying to pass it off as a "fan conclusion." This was a fetish story about belly stuffing, and you have totally removed that. If you want to keep making lard balloons, you can stick to your own work and oneshots. Leave other people's works out of it. And don't pretend like you haven't lost the plot: studiofa was painstaking in his food scenes, because he made the gluttony and hedonism a key aspect of the story. Meanwhile, you literally just copy pasted some low resolution PNGs of cartoon foods onto a table. The things he cared about, you very clearly care very little about.

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The original wasn't even that good.

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