Fuck you for getting my hopes up. Seriously, I was so happy for a second there.

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If anyone wants to compare this to the original:
Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/1465333/7bb6486e59/
Chinese: https://e-hentai.org/g/1464798/dda265beff/
Korean: https://e-hentai.org/g/1474518/f5f7b1f33b/

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p:19 UMP9:Did I just cuck myself? p:6 UMP45: I wrestled with my emotions like Joe Rogan back in the MMA. This is hilarious!

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family... 3:

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damnit. I thought it's the real translation. when will the real translation

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>when your rewrite still has ESL grammar

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At least put rewrite or someone willing to translate it for real could just ignore the idea.

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Okay someone obviously had way too much fun writing this.

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Thanks for the effort.

For tagging, just an fyi, galleries tagged as rewrites are not eligible to be tagged as poor grammar...

https://ehwiki.org/wiki/poor_grammar

Some of you people should really learn how to read the definitions around here before you go around fucking things up that others have to come along and try to fix for everyone.

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Its funny english reader giving 1 star because bad grammar and chinese reader give 1 star because of bad scan and some politics shit LUL

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这个封面就在迫害45姐

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Fuck you for getting my hopes up. Everyone, go vote for name change to add Rewrite.

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