DL: https://www.dlsite.com/books/work/=/product_id/BJ231257.html
RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/1577273/7ec3a16552/

Pretty much the standard of gender bender story

> Get turned into gril
> Wanting to go back
> Permanently become a slut in next few page

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Pretty much every hentai story just follows the same old tired formula. The moment you see the tags and the first 2 pages, you can already predict the entire thing, in most cases. Kind of sad, the industry has basically become a fast food chain, rather than a restaurant with variety and quality. I'd get it if it was just the art style, but is it so difficult to write something that slightly deviates from the formula, something that tries to do something new? I guess most people rather aim for safe modest money than risking it on a gamble...

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Even in hentai you can't avoid comments from wannabe "critics" whose heads are up their own asses

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Considering I can see desudesu's version ignoring terminology in literal quote marks within two pages, probably gonna go with this translation.

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@Psychotic Pastry
Was comparing the two as well. This version definitely seems like a translation. While desudesu is obviously a localization. Which means I will also be picking this one.

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Gender bender might be formulaic, but for me it never gets old. You might as well read Michael Kaikaku if you want a story. There might be more but that's on the top of my head.

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@arcesp

I don't disapprove of cultural localization on the face of it. Sometimes it's necessary to rewrite because a direct translation won't carry the same feeling of the original language into the new one, even if the end result is completely inaccurate. But this particular example is like changing 「ZA WARUDO」 to "time stop".

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@danielwain
It ALWAYS was a """fast food industry""" mr. smartass.
Plot with Porn-style hentais are and ALWAYS were the exception, not the norm.

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Men becoming insatiably horny succubi is my favorite kind of gender bender. <3

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@danielwain: There are hentai that don't just repeat the same formula. But check how many releases are there per day on this site alone. You can't really expect every single one of them to come up with a new unique story.
So it makes more sense to praise the ones that manage to surprise you, instead of criticizing the ones that don't.

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One thing I dont get is why the protagonist dosent try suck the slavers dry and escape.

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@neonredkill: think harder: why don't all succubi work for human brothels?

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