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The twins and me

Western
Posted:2020-04-08 21:07
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  
File Size:123.4 MiB
Length:23 pages
Favorited:55 times
Rating:
69
Average: 2.15

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Posted on 08 April 2020, 21:07 by:   naughtybard    PM
Uploader Comment
Twin brothers Jamie and Bryan spend the summer at their uncle's house where their pushover cousin lives. It won't take long before they take over the young boy's life.
Posted on 09 April 2020, 00:21 by:   feathered    PM
Score +16
The star rating is so low. Raters, why don't you explain your rate if only it would make fair to the dude who work on this? (aside from miscategorization of course)
Posted on 09 April 2020, 01:34 by:   PonHiki    PM
Score +42
Its rated so low because of the art quality mainly. Its not unfappable levels of art quality if you're into the fetishes, but its not good either. The faces are the worst part. Very inconsistent proportions of facial features and annoying, cartoony expressions. A good start though. Don't get discoutaged.
Posted on 09 April 2020, 05:23 by:   shamansun    PM
Score +19
I like the story, keep on working bro.
Posted on 09 April 2020, 18:50 by:   thondam    PM
Score +6
As PonHiki said, mostly the art quality. It is extremely simplistic, compared to the usual ilk on here. I still could live with it, since I always look up & enjoy works with the netorare tag and can just read for the story, even with unpolished art, but definitely don't appreciate the dude doing gay s---, by licking the bullies' toes. I'm expecting the story to lead up to the girl getting gangbanged/raped/netorare'd, since the beginning scenes were leading up to it only for it to turn into male on male action. Yeah I get the MC's a pushover, but it just feels like that's for a totally different audience with no indication of male x male interaction in the tags. Also, I know the gangbang resumed at the end, but where's the middle? The details leading up to the actual beginning of the sex was completely missing. How'd she end up getting f'k'd? Was it willingly, or did she resist, then she turned into a slut? Or is she mind broken? She is happy getting accolades from the twins, laughing and enjoying their company, but then in the sex scenes, she has tears coming from her eyes. Because she has 0 dialogue, you can't tell her state of mind at all. Most importantly, I NEED to see that moment where she actually turns, or the whole point of it being called netorare is lost.
Posted on 13 May 2020, 18:43 by:   bergil    PM
Score +6
Wow, leaving the art aside, the dialogue is even more cringey than rewrites. If you want to do a yaoi rape comic go for it but don't go baiting people with a straight sex scene that takes only 5 pages and then push gay foot fetish shit that takes more than 10 pages. I can't imagine someone paying to read this absolute shit of a yaoi bait.
Posted on 17 May 2020, 11:32 by:   ghghgh    PM
Score +9
Great story!
Not for everyone, there will always people who 1-star stuff simply because they're not into it, but I love seeing some of this
The drawings are perfectly fine, don't worry about that
Posted on 13 July 2020, 17:55 by:   雾姬夏乃    PM
Score +6
很好.....
Posted on 12 September 2020, 11:52 by:   dom1anon    PM
Score +6
Weird how the quality went down compared to the earlier work.

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