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The subject matter of the pictures is great, it's just a shame it's wasted with sub-par lineart.

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@siwuliuhui
If *work harder on your line art* is harsh criticism, then you need both to git gud and grow some backbone. Being a student isn't an excuse.

All the artist has to do is spend a week or two of their free time doing nothing but practicing their line art in order to get smooth lines with no rough edges, and suddenly their artwork would be 10x better.

Last edited on 23 March 2019, 07:11.

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Sorry, man upstairs, you need to know that the artist is JUST A STUDENT, so your opinion is TOO HATSH.

@KCzz15
If you mean only “the artist need work harder on the line art”.I think both the artist and I will agree with you.What I'm not satisfied with is that you said “wasted”.
（By the way，the artist is a girl.）

Last edited on 23 March 2019, 11:28.

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清道夫。。。

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How mean can you get? To protect his own galleries manbearpork is misusing his power to get the galleries i make fjorded.

This message will appear in everyone of your galleries untill the galleries are reinstated.

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拉普兰德做得到吗

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拉普兰德做得到吗

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什么人能打得过上仙啊

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