It is really my manga. I am Purple Bitch - porn creator. I create this manga.

A bit too much on the nose with the advertisements in the text. I also take that English isn't your first language because there are some grammatical errors and it doesn't flow well in certain instances, to the point that it almost reads like it was machine-translated.

The art is what saves it really. Clearly done by someone who knows what he or she is doing and the access to a model for the whole thing is a net benefit.

Not great but not bad either with above average to good artwork and some leniency for it being a first work, I give it 3 stars out of 5.

Base +6, Reson +6, sitora +6

You should try to put the pictures in the right order (use the Apply with Natural Sort option in gallery manager page, or add leading zeros to your picture names).

Base +64, scorpianpp +45

Very good, i like your job and i support that you shoud pay Income Tax.

Base +5