Wow, I can't believe I finished my first comic!
I wrote several novels, but my secret project to create a comic, and now it is becoming true.

This chapter is a prologue, and my comic is about mind control/corruption.

I have to thank those who inspired me with their works: Shinra-Kun, Galford9, Gonzo, Verinis and many others.

My work is not as good as their are, but I hope that readers will help me to improve with comments and suggestions.

If anyone likes it and wants to support my work, this is my Patreon account: https://www.patreon.com/DarkAngelComics (I will update the page weekly, starting from this weekend)

Hope you enjoy the story

Well done! Looking forward to the next one!

Base +10, Thisguy06 +6, Halfbeard +4

Keeping my eye on this one. Could be interesting. :)

For a minute on page 19 i thought his magic gave her pussy fangs!
Wrong mouth. xD

Base +6, Halfbeard +4

I would strongly recommend that you track down a proofreader, there are quite a few jarring grammar and spelling mistakes that make it hard to read this.

Base +6, crazymike +7, Mekoruu +12, italicus +16, Anotherforreal +10, Halfbeard +4

@Zman1394: Thank you for the good hint! Of course my English could be better, so I'll try to find someone who can help me with language

Base +1, JohnShepard45 +6, Halfbeard +4

awe no one got turned was good but need some bites :)

Base +6

This is looking good, one thing I’d like to see though is some physical changes, something like makeup, eye colour, or a lust crest. Can’t wait for the next update.

Base +3, Halfbeard +4

Congratulations ... from your Newly won fan THEANTJACK

Base +6

@liqs666: Ahah! Don't worry, you'll see bites :)

@thehatter13: I understand... but I think that corruption is a long and non-linear route, in particular for an hero. Phisical changes will occur only after her fall

Base +1, Halfbeard +4

Nice comic! Also waiting for your next one, hopefully it doesn't take too long ;-)

Base +6, Halfbeard +4

It looks really great for a first comic, that's good other people want to follow the steps of shinra kun, Galford9 kind :) Keep going like that

Base +7, Halfbeard +4

It's always fantastic to see more corruption works and more people following in the steps of Shinra and G9. :D

I really hope you find someone in the community to help you with proofreading because there are way too many mistakes, and it was very awkward to read at times. In addition, I hope that the corruption process can be smoothed out a little bit. The transition between before and after corruption feels a bit sudden and unnatural. Instead of feeling like a character that has an internal conflict and is struggling to fight herself, it feels like a bad actress who immediately gave in and never resisted in the first place. Stylistically, I would personally prefer if the text wasn't entirely capital letters either.

Can't wait to read the next chapter! I hope there will some transformation soon.

Base +6, Halfbeard +4

Did I misunderstand the concept of 'corruption'?

Base +2, Halfbeard -4

I'm surprised my name is up there, I never thought I would impact someone...
I honestly think your first attempt was better than mine, the camera angles and posing were great!

My grammar and scriptwriting are not good so I won't give you advice in that aspect, instead, for the rendering process... I can give some tips based on what I've learned.
1) You definitely need more render passes to get rid of the grain in your pictures.
2) Turn off headlamp in your cameras so that it would not look like a torchlight is flashing at whatever you are trying to capture in darker scenes.
3) If you use photoshop you should render the scene with more lights then post-process it to be darker, I assume you are using iray, and iray renders faster with more light!

These are the things I can think off the top of my head, but feel free to message me to discuss!

Base +3, greatlakes100 +5, Halfbeard +4

Nice work!
Look forward the next chapter

Base +6, Halfbeard +4