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[Amazon] Sanpakugan no Metsuki Warui Bakunyuu Oppai Musume ga Mushimushi no Bushitsu de Muremure Sex | Big Titty, Evil-Eyed Girl Has Lots of Crazy Sex (COMIC Masyo 2017-09) [English] [REWRITE]

[雨存] 三白眼の目付き悪い爆乳おっぱい娘が蒸し蒸しの部室でムレムレセックス♡ (コミック・マショウ 2017年9月号) [英訳] [DL版]

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Posted:2020-05-05 00:59
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Language:English  RW
File Size:32.31 MiB
Length:12 pages
Favorited:407 times
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Posted on 05 May 2020, 00:59 by:   Xephyrius    PM
Uploader Comment
I have a basic grasp but generally rely on alternate translations (like chinese) or help from google. As a result, while these translations are technically accurate, they are by nature rewrites due to the process of editing. Additionally I do add or change some dialog for personal taste, and I occasionally move around dialog if I feel it makes the storyline more sensible. Some of these are much older that I am just now uploading, so there may be some clunky and wordy writing. I make these for myself, and I only share them in hope that someone else might find it nice to read, otherwise I'm not really interested in much else.

If you can't stand the writing, then here you go: //e-hentai.org/g/1435175/a33d3f9f8f/
Posted on 05 May 2020, 02:39 by:   Blaze Viper    PM
Score +149
I wish this site would take a harder stance on certain kinds of trash content.
Posted on 05 May 2020, 03:01 by:   ndmp626    PM
Score -73
What trash content? The translation or something else? Seems like it was translated fine to me.

Edit: disregard, I didn't know that it was already properly translated. I thought Blaze's post might be a call for removal of hentai of young people.
Last edited on 05 May 2020, 18:39.
Posted on 05 May 2020, 03:20 by:   Marghedsmet    PM
Score +215
This already got translated twice. By people who didn't just use google translate. What's the point?
Posted on 05 May 2020, 03:44 by:   Xephyrius    PM
Score -100
@Marghedsmet

The point is it's a rewrite; though I would say it's also quite close to the original story, and frankly could easily just be an "alternate translation". I find a lot of hentai dialog to be pretty bland and boring to read. Sure this is an older work, so the writing is not as refined, but I'm posting my files since I figure some other people out there will enjoy it. If you really dont like it, you're free to use the link I provided in the comments, and if you really REALLY dont like it, then petition to have it expunged.
Last edited on 06 May 2020, 06:26.
Posted on 05 May 2020, 04:14 by:   meatyllamastick    PM
Score +109
I just wish "Rewrite" counted as its own language, so searching "english" would automatically exclude "rewrite".
Posted on 05 May 2020, 13:21 by:   Dyjin    PM
Score +34
At least you did your rewrite on something that was old, already was properly translated and you clearly labeled it as a rewrite.
Posted on 05 May 2020, 14:10 by:   Tie-Dyed Ninja    PM
Score -12
Who looks at a manga and says to themselves "Know what? This dialogue could be shittier."? Probably the same people who think "Instead of spending my time doing something productive like learning to draw manga, instead I'll just waste my time taking manga that other people have drawn and try to figure out how to put different dialogue with the same pictures somehow, even though that clearly won't work out.".

TL:DR Rewriters are a waste of air and should commit seppuku instead of flooding the entire first page with their absolute fucking garbage.
Posted on 07 May 2020, 06:29 by:   AN1337    PM
Score +38
Part the problem with a rewrite is if it doesn't serve a purpose. If the translation is humorous or there was no translation to begin with I could imagine most people would give it a pass, but what would stop anyone from just unleashing a torrent of rewrites onto the site? The last thing any of us want is to be flooded by material that has already been uploaded or to have certain artists or series mired by duplicate translations because someone thought changing the flair of some text served as a proper rewrite. The previous translations were pretty solid and from a cursory glance, if this rewrite is just to show how well you can rewrite the dialogue to an existing story its gonna piss alot of people off if they were expecting something new.

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