I have a basic grasp but generally rely on alternate translations (like chinese) or help from google. As a result, while these translations are technically accurate, they are by nature rewrites due to the process of editing. Additionally I do add or change some dialog for personal taste, and I occasionally move around dialog if I feel it makes the storyline more sensible. Some of these are much older that I am just now uploading, so there may be some clunky and wordy writing. I make these for myself, and I only share them in hope that someone else might find it nice to read, otherwise I'm not really interested in much else.

If you can't stand the writing, then here you go: https://e-hentai.org/g/1389867/d26eb07ec2/

For anyone that's curious, no story elements were changed in this one and no characters were changed (though on a second pass, I believe I altered the friend's name because I felt the original [reiko] was too similar to the main girl), the main difference is that the dialog is generally longer/more descriptive and I feel it flows better for the most part than the original translation.

Note*

On PG18 I have Shingo refer to the boyfriend as "keiki-kun", I'm not sure how well this works in translation, but it is meant to be a pun/jab as he purposely mispronounces it; the name/word keiki meaning something along the lines of "little boy".

Last edited on 12 May 2020, 09:29.

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Wow, you've been hit hard with low ratings. You don't deserve that. I'm giving you 5 stars. I encourage people to do the same to offset the unwarranted hate.

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Wait, why is there such a low rating? I mean, I'm not super into the art style, but this translation/rewrite is better than 75% of the stuff I see where people just translate everything literally, even if it doesn't make sense. Have five stars, bro. Maybe you'll do a manga I like, at some point.

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This is much better then the original, why the fuck getting low rate

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really dont know why the rewrite on a trash ntr comic lel

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Oh, so it's more of a localization.

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