I have a basic grasp but generally rely on alternate translations (like chinese, as I am fluent in reading it) or help from google. As a result, while these translations are technically accurate, they are by nature rewrites due to the process of editing. Additionally I do add or change some dialog for personal taste, and I occasionally move around dialog if I feel it makes the storyline more sensible. Some of these are much older that I am just now uploading, so there may be some clunky and wordy writing. I make these for myself, and I only share them in hope that someone else might find it nice to read, otherwise I'm not really interested in much else.

If you can't stand the writing, then here you go: https://e-hentai.org/g/1533644/981f07fed2/

Let me know about typos and shit and I might get around to it eventually.

If you really cant stand the writing, then here is an alternate english translation: https://e-hentai.org/g/1533644/981f07fed2/

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That was a good translation, I thought! The dialogue made sense, and seemed natural sounding, in my opinion.

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@Vigil07 thank you, I'm glad you actually read through it before commenting or rating. If you were curious, the only part of the story that I altered was that it is implied that the witch and the demon king originally had a relationship (and the crest is actually being rewoken from within her) but I just felt that it wasn't ever properly set up to begin with, and so I chose to alter that and replace a few bubbles with more interesting/smutty text instead. I do try with every new doujin to make my dialog more and more natural sounding (it's pretty evident which ones of my uploads are from older batches). Anyway, I'm happy you enjoyed it.

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I wish more people would tweak scenes to give happier endings, like Emergence, or maybe a hotter sex scene.

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wait what? why is this rated so low? there's barely any mistake on the grammar on the translation, and the material is your common hero vs demon lord, why 1.5 stars though, idgi?

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very good translation/ sounds fluid. giving you 5 stars, just interested: did you alter the text from the last page as well?

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@Subjho oh right, yes I did, sorry I forgot to mention that. That is probably one of the most heavily edited pages. The general sentiment is of course the same, but unfortunately I forget exactly what he said. The reason I changed it was because it was just some very boring dialog (if I recall something along the lines of "glad to have you back" or "now its time to take over the human world" blah blah~). If you are still super curious, just reply to this, and if/when I see it I'll edit this response to include a rough translation of the boxes on the last page.

Right I took a peek, in the order that they're read, it's something like "now then, for your reward" "it seems like the smell of my cum is stained in/won't go away" "so i'll just fill up/pour more into your womb" "thank you, shooo much (purposely misspelled since she's high on sex)" "next..." "I want to meet/I think i'll go find the girl/woman who gave birth to the hero" "haha"
As far as I'm aware, the other translated version of this work is pretty much completely accurate to the japanese text (not as if I was implying they weren't to begin with), so go ahead and check out that one if you wanna compare texts https://e-hentai.org/s/e0bd6b5f5f/1533644-20

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@Xephyrius THX for reply haha, would be great to have a rough translation for the last page from you mate :D

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We Need This in Sub Spanish people. Totally. Thanks.

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The translation is solid and I love the changes it deserves a better rating. You should translate more Tabigarasu works

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... so this basically isn't a translation

Like, some of your changes might be good, I don't know, but it stops being a translation when you choose to change dialogue because you don't like it or find it 'generic'

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@NaySlayer I agree, but shittards will always hate those endings

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love the translation

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