First issue of an ongoing original series.

Nice smiley face on the first panel

Base +6, mumble +6, teamsprocket -6, Kunavang -9

I can barely tell what I'm looking at.

Base +6, Nystic +6, autozonerewards +6, bunnygunny +8, kaze ken 1234563 +6, Kayzor +7, Ulacard +7, Kunavang +9

meh... i'd say move on to a different story... this red and black is too much... way way way too much!

Base +7, autozonerewards +6, Halfbeard -4, Kayzor +7, Master M +6, Kunavang +9

Artistically, i'd say this is a genuinely beautiful work. The use of color here is visually interesting in every panel

From a storytelling perspective, it seems like a genuinely great setup to tell a great story.

I feel like this wouldn't be out of place with something like a love, death, and robots story, largely due to the aesthetic and storytelling methods.

Erotically? Its not clear enough whats going on quite yet to really get going.

Base +8, csy1997 +6, da3monata +8, Halfbeard +4, Kayzor -7, Master M +6, Waterpipe -6, Kunavang -9