Apologies for the lack of quality, this is mainly for my personal use and I just wanted to share in case anyone else was interested. I'm going to be trying to translate more in the future.

Part 2 found here: https://e-hentai.org/g/1634627/8a6e1fa502/

Raw can be found here: https://e-hentai.org/g/1613982/c87da91d72/

It's always nice to have a translation, even if it's not top-notch. Thanks for sharing this! I do love the artwork, the x-ray on p. 14 is amazing!

Base +43, Vezirw +6

I sometimes search the web for mind control apps when I see doujins with them being used.
felt it was kinda underused in this doujin, I mean just orgasm denial. aside from that nothing that couldn't be handled by using his penis and doujin logic.

Base +5, m42a +16, jsnormandy +8

Don't be shy, cum some more.

Base +6, Vezirw +6

Honestly, as long as it's grammatically correct and makes sense, idc how accurate the translation is. The only suggestion I have is that you could probably translate some of the sound effects (even if it's just something small like her going "hah" or "ah").

Base +15

Thanks for the support everyone! <3
I personally am against translating the sound effects, as I think their meaning is near impossible to convey properly in English (and it's much, much more effort to preserve the styling, too). Even back when I didn't understand basic japanese, I could mostly infer what those meant. And, the original sounds are just too sexy to get rid of them, especially the guttural tones marked with " -- those are impossible to express concisely in English. It's not just "Ah!", it's a primal, desperate gasp for breath that makes her toes curl <3, all encapsulated in that ". If you can, I highly suggest learning basic hiragana to REALLY understand the pleasure that Tsumugi experiences ;)

Last edited on 12 May 2020, 20:55.

Base +1, jere512 +6

Learn how to add a stroke so the text doesn't blend in with the background. If you don't have a font with a good heart symbol, paste the ones from the original text. Don't use <3. Japanese is not the only language where people make sexy moans.

Base +7, weedlayer +7, TCJJ +6