This is wonderful. Not polished, but I do like seeing drafts and concept art. Or maybe, it would be better to say this is strawberry ice cream and it's not fair to judge it as wrong vanilla.

Base +6, dekamaster2 -7

This isn't "not polished" it's the work of a beginner artist. Nothing wrong with that, but don't expect to get high ratings if you post your practice work in a public gallery where people are trying to masturbate.

Base +6, Disregardme +6, dekamaster2 +7, Freelander26 +12