Just thought I'll make a non rewrite version. First time doing this so it may not be the best quality (only used paint.net), but at least the translation should be faithful to the original.

man its always depressing when she liked the guy and he rejected her so she gave her virginity away to someone else and got experience with other guys... :(

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> Can we hold hands?
A degenerate and a delinquent...

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Wow, way better TL. Thanks!

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@bakahaito Meh. Not really. The goal was reached.

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This is more complete, thank you!

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This version flows better and much easier to understand than the other one...
Former reformed delinquent and delinquent-like girl falling in love is a sweet story indeed
Thanks for sharing

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dam... why she is not a virgin, that's not warm my heart as it can....

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Well, this gives a whole different perspective about the girl.
Now the first TL feels like it was more of a personal view of the translator on the girl than a translation of the text.

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I couldn't find back the other trashlation despite how hard I was searching. I finally remembered I was filtering the rewrite tag... it got what it deserved.
Thanks for the effort of fixing other people's mess.

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No where in this translation implies she had sex before, calm down people.

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@lex15226 I mean she said that she wishes she'd give him her virginity in the text. What's new to her is actually enjoying sex since it's him. Though I do agree these comments are over reacting. Chances are that any girl you'll date will have had a previous partner. It's normal. People just obviously never bring it up since it's a reality we would rather ignore.

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I guess this is one of the reasons why we don't have a vanilla tag. It's kinda subjective.
Well at least for me, I wouldn't classify this as a vanilla-work because the girl isn't a virgin.

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why wouldn't you tag it as vanilla thought? vanilla it's about normalcy but more importantly, about "pure" love. Osananajimi, 1-on-1 sex is the epitome of vanilla.

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i think its hard to make a "vanilla" tag since we dont know the standard of "vanilla" itself

in other site, vanilla is "happy sex" basically two people that loves each other having sex

but then again, if a rape victim suddenly fall in loves with the culprit, isnt that also a vanilla?

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Well, it kind of stops being vanilla when you add tragic, sad and or unfortunate character's backgrounds as a relevant plot point in the mix.
The result of the above points is of course a bittersweet story.

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I don't know why it bothers me so much when the girl isn't a virgin in stories like this. If the man wasn't a virgin I would have no problem and I know it's very hypocritical for me to think like that. I know it's more "realistic" for woman not to save their first time, but I guess to me I just want the fantasy of two people to have their first times together and end up happy with one another.

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So fucking cute. Too sweet.

Sugar levels at some of Ootsuka Reika's stories.

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mmm to tell the truth if it was me I just sleep with her a couple of times and then leave her. cuz she juist become a Slut to him notice her and why he dont got a girlfriend in some point if he was "cool"

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@Ryan WolF Therpram Congratulations. You just won the"Absolute Scumbag Award" would you like some fries with that large order of Asshole?

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@bakahaito @FreeMan1231 I know the medium I'm reading but I think it's more like she tried so hard to get over the guy who didn't want anything with her romantically (at the time) that she probably threw herself to some other kid when she got into high school and had her image change to try to "forget him" but clearly didn't get any satisfaction from that as she stated not only to the teacher but inside her mind as well. She even was aware of how to value its own virginity as she thought she wasn't "worth it" of him putting herself very low. That's kinda depressing. You might think that if after her image change she went straight to seduce him it might have worked and she wouldn't went through her "bad" experiences.
And the problem is even if in the end they ended up together, it's still a taboo relationship that might cost his carreer even if she changed schools. No outside dating until graduation and being at very high risk if someone spotted them together. But since it's hentai world, I'll just assume everything went fine and happy for the couple.

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