amateur attempt at translating

The girl of slut outfit, goes out with another guy and her boyfriend is not suspicious. This is very forced.
But it is hentai logic, anyone would suspect and would not accept.
The boyfriend looks good and gets another girlfriend.

The writing is lazy, the girlfriend could go out normally and at night, meet with the other guy.

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Oh the artstyle & coloring is definitely good. These kinda stories need to be longer tho. Shame that it's such a short one.

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This was published in 2012. Nice dig.
https://e-hentai.org/g/629929/9a1768f67a/
http://www.doujinshi.org/book/546899/Ijimete-Hoshiino/

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So fucking obvious and he is a total idiot. If my girl went some wheres and suddenly my friend is going too.. I would of secretly followed them.. Than dumped both as friends since she is a slut and he is a fucking bastard!

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I'm gonna get some juice.
Her love juice.

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@climacus You can't do that with only 4 pages, be thankful there is something resembling a plot .

@molitar Getting that much triggered by a four pages worth of fictional story is not healthy, dude.

Leaving that aside, I always wondered in these type of stories how come totally different guys become friends just to have his friend NTR the other guy. An NTR story showing us how the two totally different guys became friends in the first place and then bringing the girl to the story would have been much more interesting.

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the book needs transaltion Y_Y

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it's 8 years old i doubt anyone will be translating it now.

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