Translated and Edited by Ashe
Original Doujinshi - https://e-hentai.org/g/1438280/2245f8fd86/

This was an unreleased translate i did around two months ago, the translation then was pretty much unreadable so i thought i'd give this another shot.

Visit https://crazygamer475.wixsite.com/website for more information on commission request.
Happy reading and i hope yall enjoy this one.

The translation it has right now is pretty rough, in all honesty. You definitely need a proofreader.

Base +6, yutshu +6, Braltewrakcus +10, Raiko-kun +6, 58569 +10, timbus +12, sligh3 +7, nikgtasa +8, Beyond Imagination +6, M_dragon +6, Browser10 +6

So, since the complete doujin is at https://e-hentai.org/g/1385761/df6adbdacc/ , i gather this was translated from a Korean translation? Oh well, if you must do a secondary translation, that's a better language than most, since it's syntactically similar to Japanese (or so I've been told) limiting somewhat the "Chinese whispers" effect.

BTW there's still some Korean on page 9... Also, four pages of credits is kinda excessive IMO.

Base +24, ninjadragon +12, 58569 +10, PinguPrin +7, Miriah +7, timbus +12, shinnt +17, sligh3 +7, TheGoodGiggle +7, DestroyedArkana +6, seeinghighdog +8, Beyond Imagination +6, Hilarity +6, and 4 more...

Pages 1-4 Artist is Unou

Base +6, heartofsword +6