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Translations done by google translate and a bunch of other apps

I did this with an iPhone. I bet everyone can tell.
It literally makes little to no sense, it’s my first translation, I’m no translator/typesetter/editor/proofreader, etc, and will probably remove this when
A higher quality English translation is is uploaded.

Any help is appreciated for my faults in this project.

If anyone wants me to translate something I’m open. Due to The current state of affairs.

I understand it's your first work, but you really should double check things before posting. Some of the lines are super hard to read and the font is inconsistent throughout.

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Yeah, I was going for visibility at first then just messed up as I continued...

Could anyone please recommend a good font? I want to work on/fix it as I go...

Thanks for the input.

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Kill it with fire.

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@BlueConstant graphite font is pretty decent, set the spacing to 10 and you're good to go, whenever you type into a word bubble just double check to see if its in the middle part of the bubble. Keep it up dude!

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Okey . Back to the drawing board. Thanks for the advice

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Uh, could you also upload the original? Also, check out this guide https://fallensyndicate.wordpress.com/typesetting-tutorial/. Helped me a lot when I first started typsetting/editing. And please, if you're going to do such a messy job with an iPhone, I think most people would agree that you might as well not waste the effort at all (not trying to be harsh, but like, I'd rather just look at the original JP version than this). It ain't hard to grab a cracked version of PS, or you could just use GIMP.

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sorry, I don’t have it. I made this from the Chinese version that was uploaded a few days ago. I have that version, a copy with most of the speech bubbles cleared, and my bad translation ...

How does one get a cracked copy of PS?

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@BlueConstant

By sailing through the pirate seas~

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"How bi-"

Artist: "Yes."

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So wait, because the oni used the maiden's own power to make her like that, can't the shrine maiden just reverse the progress using the oni horns, hunt down that oni and then get her revenge and take her own features back...?

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She can’t, apparently. The maiden destroyed the horns. The the pair that she is wearing are fakes., the Oni also drained the maiden of her own power.

I only picked that up After machine translating the Japanese version that just got uploaded here.

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