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[Higashide Irodori] Amaete ii? | Will you spoil me? (COMIC Shitsurakuten 2019-10) [English] [Dorake V] [Digital]

[東出イロドリ] 甘えていい? (COMIC 失楽天 2019年10月号) [英訳] [DL版]

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Posted:2020-06-15 13:02
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Language:English  TR
File Size:150.2 MiB
Length:20 pages
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Posted on 15 June 2020, 13:02 by:   DrakeVG    PM
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Translated for fun cause I like cute hentai
Posted on 15 June 2020, 20:25 by:   dewa_anon    PM
Score -77
Is it fun to cause people agony from reading your shit translation too?

I sure as hell wish there's a tag for poor translation in general
Posted on 15 June 2020, 21:33 by:   fula_flight    PM
Score +14
There's a better translated and uncensored version of this work out there
Posted on 15 June 2020, 23:17 by:   Z.G.    PM
Score +21
If you want to had the poor grammar you need to put a detailed list: "A gallery comment MUST detail the mistakes otherwise the tag is invalid."
Too tired to do it. But do it before we down the tag.
Posted on 15 June 2020, 23:41 by:   AHTL    PM
Score +21
Is the translation inaccurate? Seemed fine when I read through it
Posted on 16 June 2020, 00:55 by:   meow_pao    PM
Score +34
I cannot vouch for the accuracy of the translation, but the grammar here is relatively on-point. I only spotted three minor errors, so this gallery does not qualify for the "poor grammar" tag.

Page 2, panel 1: "Wants", not "want".
Page 3, panel 1: "Gossip", not "gossips"
Page 3, panel 1: "Departments", not "dept" (this is not an error in grammar, but more of not abbreviating the word.)
Page 12, panel 1: "Have an orgasm", not "have orgasm".
Posted on 16 June 2020, 03:58 by:   dewa_anon    PM
Score -17
The vocab and structure could use a hell lot of work in my opinion, the grammar itself albeit subpar is not necessarily too far off. This one's too literal of a translation, might as well not translate at all

And damn poor grammar tag actually exists?
Posted on 16 June 2020, 04:45 by:   DrakeVG    PM
Score +26
In my defense, this one is translated to English from a Vietnamese copy so maybe some meanings were lost in that one. If it sounded like too much of a literal translation, it probably is because I tried to avoid a rewrite. Those are my excuse, you're welcome to find a better one.

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