Don't care much for the story but the art is incredibly good.

Base +8

I will practice sex skill for my beloved by sucking other man's dick
"heh, I have seen this plot befo-"
and ORGANIZE A GANGBANG PARTY
"wow, now this is new"

RAW:https://e-hentai.org/g/1291475/7c29d0d31c/

Base +29, yutshu +6, SuperGenericAnon +8, 2pointer +6, zangetsu96 +7, SeptimustheSeventh +3, IncognitoMaud +6, Daddyfatsack +6, purupuru21 +6, pupss97162 +11

This what happen in original when momonga did not change her from "bitch to love momonga" lol

Base +6, AhKai +6, FireSempaii +7, 20Ilya +34, admasterh4142 +8, purupuru21 +6, Unreal 434 +6, pupss97162 +11, shinnt +20

This is the first time I've seen black bar censorship placement so arbitrary that it forms asterisk shapes

Base +12, Shurikensei +9, Chilean_Guy +6, SuperGenericAnon +8, Daddyfatsack +6, pupss97162 +11, weigazod +10

if the author's notes at the end are representative of the quality of the overall translation, then the rewrite tag is pretty deserved. reading the notes made me feel like I was having a stroke...

One example: the translator takes a sentence about the previous work's readers finding it sensual or erotic and renders it into something about the audience being sensitive.

Base +11, sleazeball +1, jessica702 +10, cycber +16, PinguPrin +7, blueperfection +7, Daddyfatsack +6, A.Kasuga +6, pupss97162 +11, DankMemes42069 +17, XDDDDDDD +6, Viper_12358 +6

No wings, immersion ruined. Can't fap.

Base +6