This whole thing is super silly, just like the later Resident Evil entries... that and "Gill", lol. But I still absolutely dig the premise of this situation; just kind of personally wish there was more of an emphasis on the brainwashing bits. Pages 18, 23, 25, 26, 30, 31, 34... et cetera. Maybe if they didn't breeze by or gloss over it so quickly?
Many erroneous spelling errors and lack-of-punctuation issues aside, this isn't the WORST thing that someone could make. It's pretty easy to get all super cringy with 3D models and animations. All in all, I like it.
The story has great potential and the quality of the images is not bad. But what I think you should improve is in the brainwashing process, putting more dialogues of the characters, in which it is seen how little by little their mind is degrading with pleasure to the point where it falls under mental control . Other than that and a few spelling mistakes, the rest is fine.
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