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[Haechaimu (smomo)] Kisei Mushi to Shitei | Parasite and Sibling [(Poor)English (Need somebody to do a better)Translation]

[ハエチャイム (smomo)] 寄生虫と姉弟

Doujinshi
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Posted:2020-07-25 17:36
Parent:1692091
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:4.64 MiB
Length:11 pages
Favorited:244 times
Rating:
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Average: 1.82

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Posted on 25 July 2020, 18:39 by:   Mr.Sal    PM
Score +105
What the fuck.
Posted on 25 July 2020, 18:44 by:   qwertz789    PM
Score +241
This "translation" is shit and shouldn't be uploaded
Posted on 25 July 2020, 18:45 by:   Larequirem    PM
Score +67
you know you too deep in weird insect fetish when the parasite actually make your dick literally harder and bigger

RAW:https://e-hentai.org/g/1623729/a8c7c74396/
related? https://e-hentai.org/g/1472081/96fc2a2985/
Posted on 25 July 2020, 19:00 by:   KuroXIII    PM
Score +67
so this is what happens in those fusion accidents in smt
Posted on 25 July 2020, 19:22 by:   asdfghfd    PM
Score +28
[SCREAMING EXTERNALLY]
Posted on 25 July 2020, 19:38 by:   dromital66    PM
Score +41
hrer umbella? You can't make this shit up.
Posted on 25 July 2020, 19:52 by:   Gabs999    PM
Score +31
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Posted on 25 July 2020, 19:53 by:   Wilfriback    PM
Score +88
You wanna know why this is more disturbing than you think?
Check this National Geographic video:

https://youtu.be/fkiL-v4X8w8

I cannot unsee.
Posted on 25 July 2020, 20:05 by:   Cheshire Cat    PM
Score +3
Fun fact: Slugs have on average 27000 "teeth"
Posted on 25 July 2020, 21:47 by:   Wisenheimer    PM
Score +112
I know I should be mad, but I can't help but laugh at this garbage translation hrer.
Posted on 26 July 2020, 02:03 by:   PipedPiper    PM
Score +25
well… *pours fuel everywhere* someone has to do it. *ignites zippo*
Posted on 26 July 2020, 02:57 by:   ndmp626    PM
Score +98
I don't care that it's not my cup of tea, but holy fuck this translation is awful. I was going to count how many grammatical errors there are on the first page - I can't even tell what the message is, though, so I can't even tell what the errors are. Please either put some effort in an upload or don't upload it.
Posted on 26 July 2020, 03:52 by:   0621zhong    PM
Score +6
世界上已经没有什么能阻止本子作者了,铁线虫寄生是不是也应该提上议程了?
Posted on 26 July 2020, 04:52 by:   Ignitation    PM
Score +19
Mama................... What in the actual fuck did I just saw?
Posted on 26 July 2020, 06:56 by:   psy123    PM
Score +144
Over ten errors in the first four pages

Page 1
"The weather forecast said it has no rain"
- "The weather forecast said there would be no rain"
"Here, umbella"
- "Here's an umbrella"
"Why it has to be raining. This suck"
- "Why does it have to be raining. This sucks."

Page 2
"The front door stil open"
- "The front door is still open"
"Sorry.. because of I"
- "Sorry... because me"
"Your friend just came all the way"
- Don't know what this is supposed to be, but probably "Your friends came all this way..."
"It's rainy day"
- "It's a rainy day", though "It's raining" sounds more natural

Page 3
"My chest is ba-dump ba-dump"
- I know Japanese tends to use onomatopoeias as verbs, but unless it's a child speaking, it just sounds awkward in English. Replace with "beating" or "throbbing"

Page 4
"Let's go to the room on the 2nd floor"
- Don't need to be so wordy. "Let's go upstairs"
"Just 3 more step"
- "Just three more steps" Spell out single digit numbers and learn plurals
"My tits is feel so good"
- "My tits feel so good"
"It's too embarrassed"
- Unless she's talking about the parasite: "It's too embarrassing"
- Also, vertical text looks stupid in English. If you can't fit the whole word horizontally, find a smaller word that fits or hyphenate
Posted on 26 July 2020, 10:10 by:   Dr.Pavel    PM
Score +19
I'm sorry but what the fuck??
Posted on 26 July 2020, 19:27 by:   o(≧o≦)o    PM
Score +6
寄生虫(生物学)
Posted on 26 July 2020, 19:43 by:   101221abc    PM
Score +6
ive seen worse
Posted on 26 July 2020, 20:38 by:   Kamo1    PM
Score +62
Bruh who changed the title to [(Poor)English (Need somebody to do a better)Translation]? Appreciated

You know it's perfectly okay to take your time when translating and editing stuff like this.
Posted on 26 July 2020, 22:47 by:   pristinalade    PM
Score -7
not bad. I finally understood what's going on. They have a fine fuck. I thought it's all about some bad weather and snails coming up from below.
Posted on 27 July 2020, 07:20 by:   dap00    PM
Score +34
The translation is bad, but honestly the concept hurts my eyes worse. I could almost believe it's just a horrible new way to censor.
Posted on 28 July 2020, 11:50 by:   johnsmith001    PM
Score -25
oh the other work need eng translation too. Thank you for this translation, and do your best in the next!
Posted on 31 July 2020, 16:10 by:   conkikhon    PM
Score +6
smomo is Horihone Saizou and Midori no Rupe combined
Posted on 02 August 2020, 03:16 by:   唧唧fff    PM
Score +3
这是什么鬼操作
Posted on 10 September 2022, 11:14 by:   Blaze Viper    PM
Score +6
Horihone Saizou...that's a name I've not heard in years.

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