Interesting concept and presentation, I'd like to seem more explicit illustrations. But this is pretty good as is. ESPECIALLY because each page is a metatextual diary entry that has itself been illustrated. That's why I'm giving this 4 stars! Excellent!

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Forcibly changing a legal identity, throwing out your possessions, and manipulating your brother to act like a 15 year old little sister due to inexplicable events, while throwing them into highschool of all things (because this whole ordeal didn't seem to add enough stress apparently) isn't normally something I would excuse as tolerable behavior. But in porn land it certainly is. That or anime land maybe.

Point is: fuck Grace.

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Pages 18 and 19 are out of order

Base +6, crazyfrogdom -6

I don't know why but stories like these fill me with a lot of anger. I'm surprised the brother hasn't run away, who would stay and endure such horrible abuse. This is the type of story that will pop in my head randomly for the next decade and ruin any day.

Not only is this guy dealing with a changing body, but his sister has almost turned this into some power play/fetishized him in that she gives absolutely 0 fucks about anything hes going through. Instead of allowing him to explore things at his own pace, in his own way, shes forcing him into her ideal person. You must have makeup, you must have painted nails, you must have frilly clothing, I am going to throw out all your stuff and replace your room with what I think it should be. The brother is no longer a person, hes more akin to a doll or a sim character, to be molded in whatever way the sister feels with no input whatsoever.

I don't know why I read some stories so seriously, is this what autism is?

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@Chroomsh33

I agree, and porn part seems to more of just be a crutch otherwise. Since most of it isn't porn.

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Since this is incomplete shouldn't it have an [Ongoing] tag in the title area?

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