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Original version at https://e-hentai.org/g/1572241/fe82c30941/

Was your commissioner aware that every single speech and SFX bubble has grey marks in them? I can clearly see where you tried to clean text, but you used grey instead in EVERY SINGLE FUCKING BUBBLE. Also, I don't know how it's humanly possible, but all your SFX text is off-center. Why bother "cleaning" bubbles when you're not even going to properly center your SFX anyway? Plus your scans aren't leveled, being in RGB color instead of 32 or 64-color Greyscale.

Even worse was that somebody paid for this shit. Why would anybody pay money to somebody who can't even clean text bubbles properly, can't center their SFX, and didn't level their scans? If I were the commissioner, I would demand a refund because your work is rife with all these problems that somebody who knows the basics of Photoshop wouldn't even make.

Base +28, Hifuminna -3, borkarkar -7, zero9g9 +6, Hammervurst -7, Lewdovico +9, as102 +11, 151132 +8, KuzumaKazuma +5, trickmaster4127 +7, Mac036 -6, dankestdungeon +19, Xalren525 +6, and 29 more...

I'd swear I've seen THIS EXACT SCENARIO in no less than three other doujins.

Base +8, as102 +11, Plastic Lover +12, raptorshru +6, edede +13, FullyOtaku +7, Regret513 +6, asterix666 +6, Blaze Viper +6, felzasj +6, Bubblejum +6, Flafski +6, Tierno +6, and 13 more...

me too Junakiman I think I have seen the same scenario couple of times. but it still gets it's job done as fap material

Base +5, raptorshru +6, Blaze Viper +6, JTZ429 +1

Is there a tag for energy drain/level drain? I've seen a couple similar to this premise but finding them after the fact is difficult

Base +6, TheWelcomeMatt +6, Regret513 +6, RyuuHawke +6, xw1as +9, raptorshru +6, Hurricane415 +6, Blaze Viper +6, Serena Lea +6, unknownshadows +6, Drcl97 +9, nettimato +6, TVvsPC +7, and 2 more...

There definitely should be a tag for energy drain! Good stuff.

Base +11, RyuuHawke +6, xw1as +9, raptorshru +6, Regret513 +6, Hurricane415 +6, Serena Lea +6, Laurimoz +7, unknownshadows +6, xElemental +12, Drcl97 +9, nettimato +6, JTZ429 +1, and 1 more...

The energy drain stuff is usually rolled into the "absorption" tag, but I don't really think it fits.

Base +6, repeatedmeme +9, xw1as +9, raptorshru +6, edede +13, FullyOtaku +7, Regret513 +6, Serena Lea +6, unknownshadows +6

energy drain is pretty op for a lv 1 and how does the slime hold lv99 in place??

Base +6, darkscizor +6, Plastic Lover +12, xw1as +9, PhantomEnigma +6, UtterDrong +6, lampuiho +6, Serena Lea +6, Flafski +6, unknownshadows +6, Nicosai +18, SLCH000 +6, Spooky Ghost Butts +7, and 1 more...

Page 5 has "monters", which isn't a word.

Base +6, JTZ429 -1

- "This 'special ability' is useless against travelers or people around the same level you were"
- Level raises up to around where the hero's has dropped to
- Goes past and reaches level 99 with no problem
That and a level 99 being completely immobilized by a few low level slimes seems really inconsistent to me

Base +24, FullyOtaku +7, PhantomEnigma +6, Soldier A +6, lampuiho +6, UtterDrong +6, Darker7 +6, Flafski +6, Niwik +6, unknownshadows +6, Bobkatze +6, SLCH000 +6, TheGreatestCool +5, and 6 more...

Man ex-hero losing to energy drain succubus is one of my favorites.

@Cadavrus
Yeah this was not what I expected going in. I saw absorption,transformation and vore so I was expecting something completely different. An unexpected and welcome surprise.

Base +11, Bubblejum +6, Serena Lea +6, xElemental +12, nettimato +6, VanillaFaps +6, JTZ429 +1, tubo +6

If anything's looking for another story like this, here's one that I immediately thought of: https://e-hentai.org/g/1010980/32f989dad0/

No absorption tag for it, interestingly enough, so there goes the idea of it being a substitute for level drain.

Base +6, Serena Lea +6, OuiOui699 +2

I really like the source comic and I appreciate the translation effort, but the excessive hyphenations make it hard to read. I don't even know how you got a program to hyphenate a word as short as "thick". It's especially frustrating because there's so much space left in the bubbles that it should have been an easy problem to avoid.

Base +6, GearZeroSky +19, Serena Lea +6

With this much level drain, I have expected the imp to blow up in the end. No way aa loli like her can handle that much power.

Base +6, Spooky Ghost Butts +7