Like it or not, I'm back with another upload again. What was originally meant to just be a quick grammar/typesetting cleanup ended up turning into an entire re-checking/re-translation after I found quite a number of errors with the original (and unfortunately the other version appears to be based off of the first upload).

As an example, one of the bigger errors was the misattribution of dialog on P.23; in both other translations, in the grey bubbles, Reina is incorrectly addressing Yui instead of (whispering) to Yuuki.

That, and the original translation was surprisingly choppy quality (even given the translator), and the subsequent cleanup was a little too campy (for lack of a better word) for my taste.

Anyways, please enjoy, and let me know of any spelling errors that I may have missed.

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/1483740/b0d9122401/

Edit* I should note that I really dislike adding periods to dialog boxes; I'm certainly NOT ever using semi-colons in dialog even if they would be appropriate. As it's meant to be people talking, perfect written grammar takes a back seat and commas as natural pauses go to the forefront.

Edit2* Made a minor fix to P.11, and a tiny change on P.07, thanks celltf

Many thanks :)

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As a side note, I got too lazy to translate the author's note at the end, but from what I understand it more or less goes something like this: "I've drawn big modified nipples for so long that it was a little hard to try and get back to normal ones... guess it's just a habit now lol. Initially during the plot planning, I wanted to involve both sisters and go much longer on the story, but that became too big of a project to handle. So I ended up just focusing on the older sister for this one. Wanted to/still want to do some anal scenes, but I'm not sure where I would fit them in now. If I can, I would like to do a sequel featuring the younger sister, so look forward to part 2! thanks for all your support/appreciating my work."

Last edited on 16 September 2020, 17:18.

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Thats absolute masterpiece. Thank you for translate and upload.

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Thanks for fixing it

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@Xephyrius
I was just about to say... "Heey, I've read this before, more than once.."

Thanks for looking at the translation. Always good to have people doing this kinda work.

I take it you speak Japanese then? If I find a good gallery that got a bad translation, do you mind if I pass the link on to you? Then you can decide if it's worth your time or not.
It's happened a couple of times, but don't know anyone who knows Japanese.

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@AtotehZ
For what it's worth, my roommate is/speaks japanese, so I consult when necessary (I'm personally fluent in chinese, actually). Though I'd say I'm fairly well acquainted with the language at this point (and the tropes of dialog writing). For full transparency, I use my fair share of online resources to double-check what I'm writing; but I feel the research or grammar/language studying that I do is more than sufficient to provide an accurate work. And, at least I hope, that having done this for multiple years now has improved my recent work to a presentable level for the public.

The reason I started doing any of this was to clean up poor translations (or in some cases, spice up passable translations) of stuff that I liked anyway. So, with that in mind, feel free to send me a message through the forum; though I can't guarantee anything, and I won't be taking commissions now or ever.

Last edited on 13 September 2020, 20:46.

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Is an actual succubus? I know eyes can be stylized, but jeez.

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Would love for this to get a sequel

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I wouldn't mind having her suck out my soul. she has a killer body.

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@mixomoore
she could have contact lenses to go with her gyaru look

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Two alternative English scans:

Incogna:
https://e-hentai.org/g/1528809/b40e0bf57e/

CGrascal:
https://e-hentai.org/g/1487957/971dfc6371/

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Reina best girl 10/10

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@cyrukus
it is getting a sequel

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