If you have the time, it would be awesome if you could tell me what you didn't like or liked about it so I can improve my m̶a̶n̶g̶a̶k̶a̶ 3D skills and make more planetary-giantess content.

Check out https://www.patreon.com/gtswaifuism to play my games.

Last edited on 13 February 2021, 08:40.

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I'm not sure you should call yourself a mangaka if you're just tracing MMD models. Beyond that, it's fairly rigid (owing mainly to MMD posing, which can be improved).

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I was 99% joking when I said that ^^, although I'm not using MMD models nor MMD, they are made using KumaKuma manga editor, and I'm making most backgrounds(I used a few others since they really fit the scene).

But thanks for the suggestion, I have a lot to work on the posing, I know it's really bad. What do you think can be improved specifically?

I edited the mangaka text.

Last edited on 13 February 2021, 08:41.

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The ones with colour looked pretty jarring, the monochrome ones were okay. Also shouldn't be tagged female:vore, that's only used when the "victim" is female, as in, female body getting eaten. Don't think there's a misc tag for it, so that tag should probably just be removed.

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@danielwain thanks for the suggestion! I will try to reduce the number of colored panels next time ^^. I downvoted the female:vore tag, although it seems it's still there. Need the vore: planet tag lol

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I'll try to word this as nicely as possible, but I will say beforehand, I'm not confident in my tact.

Background characters, like the ones on pages 6, 10, 12, and 28, are usually simplified quite a bit. This is done to tell the reader that these characters aren't important to the story and are only here to generate an atmosphere. In this case, to convey the despair of the people watching what's happening. Some of yours seem quite complicated, mostly the girl models.
Generally, don't flesh out anything other than their general appearance. Try to keep them mostly unremarkable. They shouldn't even be beautiful unless it matters to the story. They don't even have to be high-poly unless they're close. It'll be less confusing for the reader if they aren't distracted by meaningless characters.
This is a common mistake for those who use 3D models.

Also, your environments seem very flat.
This is likely because there is no foreground. There is nothing in front of the characters, except other characters and props. If they're in a forest, try to place plants in front of them. Flowers, bushes, trees, a rock, just something to indicate that they aren't just pasted on top of an image. You could try placing them in 3D environments, but that's just a suggestion.
Making your characters look like they're actually in the world you show is quite important.

Finally, just a tip to help with the topic of giants in general, make the most of the advantages 3D gives you. Perspective is a breeze for you. Much less effort than a 2D artist has to put in. Ramp up the FoV quite a bit to make them look super tall and towering. (I don't know if that's possible in whatever program you are using, I've never tried 3D art, but Field of View makes certain scenes look much better.)

Hopefully that wasn't overwhelming, I know I wrote a lot, it might be a lot to take in at once.

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@The Mastermid I will save your post to read in the months to come :D, great writing! I will try to apply some of your tips in my next works.

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that actually is not your 's ,I think you take it from a Chinese artist

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@Flex_raotom I'm just using a Chinese editor software, which is why I'm using Chinese characters, I would never steal someone's art, but still, I'm glad you commented xD

Heavenly Wind and Ominous Final Form are two characters from my game, which is the reason I put their names there, to increase immersion. The manga wasn't even supposed to be published outside the game so I just hurriedly put that last image there, here is how it will look in the game's built-in manga viewer(the player can scroll down by moving the character): https://imgur.com/a/GhsCtFi

Thanks for reading ^^ I'm still trying to improve so for now it's not very good. My focus is 95% on gts game-making and 5% on art for now.

To tell you the truth I was inspired to make my game by a chinese artist which made a similar H manga to this one but 1 trillion times better, I will link if I find it.

Edit: I was inspired by this https://e-hentai.org/g/1507694/c5d5b2e1f1/

Edit 2: I'm very happy to be called an artist, nobody ever called me like that before(even if I know I'm really bad lol), you really made my day(or week) :D

I thought I had included it in the credits, but it seems I forgot to. I made it with https://store.steampowered.com/app/1020820/KumaKuma_Manga_Editor/
Be sure to buy it if you can, I'm only using 1% of its power and was able to make this. It will probably revolutionize the manga industry as it evolves.

Last edited on 01 October 2020, 08:27.

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