First attempt at translating something. Please let me know if I did anything wrong and I'll do my best to fix any mistakes.

Good things first: Thanks that you tried to translate some Amano Ameno, I appreciate that.

Now to the bad things:
1. Mistake: you didn't use a comic font. Good free fonts are Anime Ace, Komika, Wurper Comics, Wurmics Bravo and Wildwords is also kind of standard. You can download most of them for free at sites like dafont.com.
2. Mistake: You didn't use center align for the text. I recommend that you read a typesetting tutorial like: https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/the-idiots-guide-to-editing-manga/guide/main
3. Mistake: You used e-hentai's downscaled 1280px horizontal res images instead of the full resolution images. (unfortunately the most commen rookie mistake)

You can download the original resolution images via one of the following methods:
1. Torrent Download (if available; WARNING torrents not always contain the latest or the full res version of a gallery. Downscaled torrents normally have 1280x in their names)
2. Archive Download (click on "Archive Download" and "Download Original Archive"; e-hentai account and some GP or Credits required)
3. The "Download Original" link at the bottom of each individual image (if there is noch such link the image on your screen and the original are identical) [e-hentai account and GP or Credits required now]

Additional Q&A:
Q: Does that mean I have to upload different sized versions of my images?
A: No. You just have to upload your original sized images. All other resolutions that e-hentai displays depending on the users settings will be created by e-hentai.

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/995590/938b0f9b83/

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It would be nice if the last page was him having a new girlfriend and not giving a shit about the whore. Then the whore could see them happy and break down completely.
It would be even greater humiliation than it's now, I think.

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I'm confused. Did Shun ever cheat on her?

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Is this a single chapter? Title says ch 10. So, I assume it has 9 more chapters but can't find the tl'd ones.

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destroying your own life for petty revenge. thats a new one.

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That's some big brain revenge.
The problem is the one who should care cut any connection with her.

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It's a nice satirical piece hentai against all the Harem Hentai Game out there. The main male Character probably have harem of girls he dated and fuck, but end up choosing the main female character. But the main female character at a way to fuck him up, does this for revenge against him. Now he does not have his harem anymore because he choose her, but she end up NTR his ass. GG.

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@Ancient-Alien Thanks for the advice. I'll do all of that from now on.

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