Hey there, it's me again!
This time I tried translating directly from the japanese with my... well, limited understanding of the language, hopefully you'll like it!
I didn't add my card this time because I'm not sure if it's even that good, so if I made any mistakes on the translation feel free to point it out, kanjis are hard for me so any help is well recieved!

Also, here's my mail in case you need to contact me: enderleaf96@gmail.com

Here is the JP gallery which I used to do the typesetting:
https://e-hentai.org/g/1102228/b8764e45ea/

And the original work:
http://www.doujinshi.org/book/965836/Falling-Down/

No es por salir del tema pero revelaro a steve en smash, lets fucking gooooo

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duplicate page 7 & 8

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Oh, I didn't noticed that, now is fixed!

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WHAT'S WRONG WITH THE STREET!?

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@Enderleaf
>Oh, I didn't noticed that, now is fixed!
If you're looking to get rid of the tedious parts of editing and proofreading, e-hentai officially supports a forum where you can find other volunteers to help you edit and QC the item before you upload it. Or if you're looking for something new to translate it, they have ongoing projects too.
https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showforum=81

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@Anime Janai
Awesome, thanks! I could really use the useful links thread first so I might improve some more, then maybe I'll take on the on going projects there, really appreciate the comment!

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Thanks for the upload and TL. Glad to see some of the older LLS stuff is finally getting translated

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Oh nice thanks for the translation!

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Since Enderleaf is consistent with LL upload
this commenter purposely looking for idol galleries only to going around talking crap about idol https://e-hentai.org/g/1102808/6d2d9a474a/
@curipepe24 https://e-hentai.org/g/697891/149165f55e/ https://e-hentai.org/g/1059165/e134033b2f/

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