I tried making my own English version using DeepL, a lot of googling and looking at the official one.
It's my first time doing this and I have near-zero skill in Japanese but I hope it's eligible.

I'll try to update a chapter or two per day.

JP:https://e-hentai.org/g/1751429/6b7aff6a29/
KR:https://e-hentai.org/g/1750916/3628d410c1/

Author's link:
https://www.patreon.com/NT00/posts
https://gumroad.com/nt00
https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/2344550
https://fantia.jp/fanclubs/32167

Support the Author!

I mean at least it’s DeepL and not Google Translate

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I still don't see the NTR in this

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Godspeed, sir

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The NTR, as it is, isn't here yet.

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https://e-hentai.org/g/1747800/84c9df8941/

I commend your effort to try and translate but there's already an English version uploaded.

Please do not be discouraged! We would love to see other translated works.

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@TheUnforeseen
That version is the author's ver. which is usually 2-4 chapters behind the main series in JP. It also suffers from poor grammar which i'm willing to believe is due to the NT00's poor english skills paired up with some google translate help. And while DeepL+Dictionary TLs certainly counts as kinds of machine translations, they're still leagues ahead from the GoogleTL ones, since DeepL's algorithms seem to be far more accurate than Google's when it comes down to translating JP to EN.
Either way, if nrdn25 keeps up his current pace we might be able to see the current untranslated chapters months before NT00 releases theirs, so Imho don't really see this endeavor as something redundant.

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I just want you to know that i appreciate the effort @nrdn25

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On page 99 the text is out of the text box.

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Great stuff i like a lot the story, sweet and in the same time kind of sad

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Page 26: I'm pretty sure that X-ray filter doesn't come standard with any version of Android. Which is a pity. Bunch of prudes...

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The last couple pages confused me so did she go with the other guy or does she still want the guy she's texting

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@Redphantom41
It's a variation of the set, and alternate omake.

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Nice work!
Some wierd grammar here and there, but great job translating all of this

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Mark this as machine translation in the title. Super misleading.

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nice ending tho, make it in different alternate

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Nice work. You just forgot a thing on the image 220. On the pic is written something like "Tomorrow I take your virginity (virgin graduation). Condom are necessary, else we (absolutely) don't do it"

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Hm...
is NTR?
but it still not peak story yet, right?

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Ch 29 p400 (for me to remember)

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I think that ep 25 is missing an image where you see a used condom fall when everything is still dark

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Page 349 and 350 are the same.

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@wjxxhulka66n6 so is 371 and 372

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@wwjxxhulka66n6 @Letmeinjoe09
There is a difference in both images, one is with pubic hair and the other is not

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@asesnight03 Ok cool. I'll keep that in mind for future duplicates that may appear.

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Thank you for the update! I wonder if it's the last chapter or we'll see another one.

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aperantly it ended, do you intend to translate the last chapter soon?

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So an open ending to him being a cuck or not

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I wouldn't say it's an open ending... that smile speaks volumes.

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So what he said at the end is "I love you, so you can fuck around with guy that has better dick than mine."

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Awesome end. I'm guessing she's going to fuck around.

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welp, you just need to have that kind of ending afterall huh?

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So happy end achieved!..

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I see it as an open ending because she said she's for his use only. And she knows he gets turned on when she teases him about other guys

He told her he loves her as she is now and as she was before (implying any version of her is OK)

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YES!! I LOVE HOW THIS ENDED!! WHAT A CHAD!!! FUCK NTR!!!!! LOVE YOUR GIRLFRIEND!

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@TempestWolf Bruh it ends on the implication that they're going to continue with the NTR stuff. Calm down lol

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THERES JUST SOMETHING WRONG WITH THEIR HEADS BUT THEY JUST JOKING THEY DONT DO.IT AGAIN ,GLAD THEY END UP TOGETHER

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would never date such a dumb girl irl but the story of who she became and how she treated him when she decided to stop being retarded was awesome. it was clear she actually cared about him and just didn't understand how to go about it, and other people took advantage of her. being teased when done right adds to the chemistry but that's where it should end. still its nice that it wasn't just an mc and his girl both being super retarded, there's hope for the world yet.

@lukongpanda you're projecting yourself on me. not everyone is a hard stuck incel such as yourself. get over yourself and please learn to treat yourself as well as other people with a basic level of respect.

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@valesauce lmao as if you could pick and choose who to date irl

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@valesauce they are both victim to circumstances.

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Wow, I thought it was just a plain/simple happy ending when I read the raws, but I guess MC can't let go of his cuck tendencies. Well, at least he got to have one of her firsts lol.

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哇，我以为这只是一个朴素的/简单的快乐结局，当我读到拉，但我想MC不能放弃他的卡克倾向。好吧，至少他能得到她的第一次机会。

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In the end ... Yumi called Senpai because haru couldn't satisfy her XD..... i know that's the true ending....

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You know, you should remove "rewrite" in the title.
Just because you used machine translation doesn't mean it's a rewrite. At worst, it's an inaccurate translation.
A rewrite implies you added things that you know aren't in the original to fit your own preferred scenario.
From what I read, this is just a translation that's meant to be faithful to the original dialogue.
I wouldn't want anyone to avoid this because they mistakingly thought it was someone's fanfiction.

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the last few pages are kinda doublespeak. she's basically saying I want to have sex with you again in the way she knows would get him hard. "I know talking about another guy gets you really hard, and now that I know how it feels to have sex with the one I love...". that last page where they leave it open ended is to try to ambiguously appeal to both kinds of people of letting their headcanon be what happens in their head. but she makes it pretty clear herself and demonstrated it while they were having sex that she figured out how to excite him and is willing to say the code words for him, because she enjoys making him feel good and enjoys having sex with him. basically whenever she's horny and wants to fuck him, she has to appeal to his jealousy. he made it clear himself before she came over that he wanted her for himself so her fucking other guys is going to be a deal breaker by that point since now they're officially a couple. I normally hate stories like this but this was very intricately written.

@pocongpohon the last chapter is pretty much the money of this story. the rest of it though it's just classic ntr brain dead behavior. idk there's some butthurt haters who get pissy when you mention this stuff. she's not a victim of circumstance, she made a series of choices that are on par with vegetable function. you can say he's a victim of circumstance for the most part but after her one experience with the senpai she should have been like yea maybe I should be a little more careful who I spend time with and not spread my legs to random people. like the idea that she never cared about any of them and used them for practice for the real deal is nice and all, a great fantasy, but it just doesn't exist in reality. in the real world women like her end up emotionally damaged and incapable of love, least of all capable of loving some shy guy who's afraid of being too forward with her. like I said the last chapter is endearing but the rest of the story is pretty toxic.

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Thanks for this, I really appreciate the effort that this must have required!

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@ozuuma123
Agreed, I initially went with the other version and only check out this one later, because I got really hooked and was desperate for more.

@nrdn25
Thanks for the effort of putting this together, and do remove "rewrite" if possible.

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at Page 277 and 296, didn’t she get tricked? The guy was supposed to start a party but our retard(both protagonists are retarded) MC didn’t get shit. FMC is as smart as a brick and MC doesn’t have any common sense.

Yeah yeah, it’d suck if they didn’t get together as the ending but this is such a BS ending. I’m not some conservative christian but it’d be really hard to pretend to be a normal couple after all of this shit.

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Was there no Delusion #1? Is it on page 221?? A bit confused on the order....

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Isn't there more of this story posted by the artist? Will the translations be continued anytime soon?
The art and story are hot, I wanna see more

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