This is a really bad translation of [Blue Blood] Koya no Naka no Mizuki https://e-hentai.org/g/1684605/232c71155b/

Better than nothing but it isnt complete yet and thank you for the effort.

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It's a decent translation, thanks for this. I hope you finish it.

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thanks mister!!!!!

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4 star because unfihished but I glad to found someone has a same fetish

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I'm more bothered by that typesetting

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Imagine consenting to have your limbs cut off

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the art is horrible but the concept is pretty hot

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Hope the last part will be translated as well.

@GuroLover12: I've not read through it yet but there's a mind control tag and skimming through it I see those typical hypnosis spirals in some places.

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和日文原版对照了一下 可能是因为语言文化差异吧 翻译者在很多语言框没有翻译原文 而是根据上下文自己编了一段， 不管这么样还是感谢英译者吧

不过有一说一 这个英译真的八行

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@Krowler: No, she volunteers, no idea where the mind control comes from.
She loves a rich guy, but he only wants a girl willing to become a "Dog girl" for him.
While checking out what that means and how it is done, she discovers that she might be into that.

@marcsm2008: Ah, that part is changed in the english translation, thanks for the info.
She agrees in the english version but does not like to get immediately overwhelmed with orgasm, from how i interpret their conversation.

Last edited on 09 October 2020, 18:02.

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@ heretic1311 It's a bit more complicated than that, actually.
She indeed volunteers, but the reason for the mind break tag is because she does INDEED has her mind broken after she starts going to the pet training facility. They even drug her, as you can see, making her almost insane with arousal caused by the drugs. She eventually decides to say NO when they ask if she wants to be converted to a dog girl, but her broken mind fails to say "no", so she just accepts and immediately has an orgasm and pass out.

So while she indeed volunteered, the mind broken tag also makes sense.

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I enjoy seeing pet play, but the surgery and drug angle makes this so extreme. Don't know if I'll finish.

Last edited on 12 October 2020, 13:27.

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please finish the translation, this crap is really hot

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My thing is why are any of the surgeries needed. The brainwashing and drugs already seem to get the job done well enough without drastically reducing life span and taking the arms and legs

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@Supeskupes Taking out the arms and legs is a way to make them act and look less human. I liked it a lot, it's a sure way to make them permanently pets, to make sure they will never be normal humans again.

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I think the whole point of the surgeries and chemical changes to the body is to make them completely inhuman. They're basically dead people walking around with highly modified bodies

I really like how she's just accepting her choice.

Last edited on 16 October 2020, 22:28.

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Honestly I would have found it to be a lot hotter if there was no surgery or similar needed, if they simply used special clothing or whatever to force the arms and legs to remain folded at all times. Oh well.

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Bad art
Bad translation
But I still liked it.

I guess I read hentai for the plot.

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Well, that was...something?

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"Bad translation"?
More like "Slow Translation", actually...

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Sorry, I work most days and am very busy, so I only have little time to focus on this story.

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Don't get me wrong, I'm VERY thankful to you, you are doing a great job. Its just that the slow pace is feeding my anxiety. :p
But anyway, thanks for doing this. I really like this story, It surely deserves a translation.

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I wish I could be that woman .To be completely and utterly consumed by lust and have full enjoyment in obedience, it's a nice fantasy. I agree with @spork4313988 and @marcsm2008 that the modifications are to distance herself from her humanity. It's also to make her more fragile and dependent on her master. I know it's extreme though and not everyones cup of tea. I have read one other work similar to this it was called oh my dog https://e-hentai.org/g/31779/ec086e189a/ . It's a little bit more extreme and violent but it has similar themes. If anyone has any other hentai's they can suggest similar to this that they can post in the comments I would appreciate it .

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This is a rewrite, right? Is marked as translation, but the very first page saying she's in college already says something's not right.

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I think she was manipulated.... like FING DRUGGED AND MANIPULATED into her choice.

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The amputation stuff is not my stuff, but her mind transforming was good. At least she's happy.

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Please plase please translate the other 2 comics aswell

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A Troons dream. Wanting your body parts cut off.

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cant wait till its finished

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is this translation dropped?

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He probably won't finish this, sadly. :/

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probably,the korean translation finish before this traslation, sad

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More chapter please

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> @ heretic1311 It's a bit more complicated than that, actually.
> She indeed volunteers, but the reason for the mind break tag is because she does INDEED has her mind broken after she starts going to the pet training facility. They even drug her, as you can see, making her almost insane with arousal caused by the drugs. She eventually decides to say NO when they ask if she wants to be converted to a dog girl, but her broken mind fails to say "no", so she just accepts and immediately has an orgasm and pass out.
>
> So while she indeed volunteered, the mind broken tag also makes sense.

I think the mind break tag fits, but IMO the Japanese original and this English translation agree pretty well

the Japanese panel 133 says:

「私は犬娘になります。」
「思っていることとは逆ですが、わたしはことわることができませんでした」

"I will become a dog girl." "This is the opposite of what I was thinking, but I couldn't refuse"

the English panel 133 says:

"I couldn't believe what I'd just heard coming out of my mouth. I shocked myself by saying it.. but I also knew I couldn't refuse to continue"

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Koya no Naka no Mizuki Is still incomplete please finish it

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中国人翻译的吧，为什么我一个英语四级没过的渣渣都能看得懂？

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This is still in incomplete please complete it soon I waited for long time for this.

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