>No leveling
>text aligned left
>text covering Sanzou's face
>not text AA
>no outline on the text to at least make it readable.

I can see this if your first upload, but I feel like you could have put a bit more effort that what you did on this, man. This just screams "rushed."
Slowly TL's of this nature are becoming the "norm" on this site.
A least the English is... serviceable, I would strongly advice you revisit this work, This just ain't it, chief. No point in rushing if the end product just isn't going to be good.
Take your time, look at other uploaders works, and typeset properly. The community will appreciate your efforts.

Hell, if you need help, hit me up on discord. https://discord.gg/aJbedRF

Base +6, -Revan- +16, chesterliver +6, Tarball +13, MACZ2021 +6, SpaceCamel +6

And not to forget the number one rookie mistake of using e-hentai's downscaled 1280px res images instead of the full res images.

If you're going to translate and typeset more, please use the original sized images for editing and not e-hentai's downscaled 1280px horizontal resolution images.

You can download the original resolution images via one of the following methods:
1. Torrent Download (if available; WARNING torrents not always contain the latest or the full res version of a gallery. Downscaled torrents normally have 1280x in their names)
2. Archive Download (click on "Archive Download" and "Download Original Archive"; e-hentai account and some GP or Credits required)
3. The "Download Original" link at the bottom of each individual image (if there is noch such link the image on your screen and the original are identical) [e-hentai account and GP or Credits required now]

Additional Q&A:
Q: Does that mean I have to upload different sized versions of my images?
A: No. You just have to upload your original sized images. All other resolutions that e-hentai displays depending on the users settings will be created by e-hentai.

And read a typesetting tutorial or two like this: https://www.insidescanlation.com/etc/the-idiots-guide-to-editing-manga/guide/main or you' ll need some thick skin.

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/1777608/6b9de763f1/

Base +17, sleazeball +2, The Inker -8, sonictmp -7, -Revan- +16

Nice... It's unreadable

Base +10, chesterliver +6