Raw https://e-hentai.org/g/1745234/97845a6b70/

Base +30

The translation is pretty awkward. Specifically, a number of lines don't make much sense.

Here are a few examples:

P2: "It feels like you were a golden pair! Eiji-senpai doesn't care if she is in that condition, doesn't she?" "I don't think she cares the most."

I think this should be rephrased as, "Those two seem like the perfect couple! Eiji-senpai doesn't mind that others see them that way, does she?" "I don't think she minds at all."

P3: "If Echizen saw a natural body like this!"

I think this should be "If Echizen could see what your naked body looks like...!"

P4: "If you find such a thing, it's dangerous."

I think this should be "It would be dangerous if he saw you like this."

And so on.

Base +34, xaelath +6, danielwain +9, cutting_dicks +4, Yosh_ +11

Thank you for your feedback. Its helps me a lot.

Base +2

1. Don't use color fonts when they're not in the original. It normaly never looks good and here it's not reaaly been a good choice either. Especially the color SFX slapped over the originals.

2.And, please use the original sized images for editing and not e-hentai's downscaled 1280px horizontal resolution images. They are for viewind and not for editing.

You can download the original resolution images via one of the following methods:
1. Torrent Download (if available; WARNING torrents not always contain the latest or the full res version of a gallery. Downscaled torrents normally have 1280x in their names)
2. Archive Download (click on "Archive Download" and "Download Original Archive"; e-hentai account and some GP or Credits required)
3. The "Download Original" link at the bottom of each individual image (if there is noch such link the image on your screen and the original are identical) [e-hentai account and GP or Credits required now]

Additional Q&A:
Q: Does that mean I have to upload different sized versions of my images?
A: No. You just have to upload your original sized images. All other resolutions that e-hentai displays depending on the users settings will be created by e-hentai.

Base +17, BaperNu +9, cutting_dicks +4, Yosh_ +11

Rough grammar
p2 the word the world -> the world
see the -> see them
p4 thats right -> that's right
p5 but its raw -> it's raw
p6 its completely -> it's completely
its because -> it's because
p7 put it out -> pull it out
p8 im so -> I'm so
Im going -> I'm going
p10 that again in the club room -> in the club room again
im so -> I'm so
im angry -> I'm angry
near with -> near

Base +42, Glovelove. +31