First and foremost let me begin by saying this is a MACHINE TRANSLATION, I'm not gonna try and bullshit anyone and say it isn't. This was made using the Chinese, and French translations, and the original Japanese raw, and running each version through 4 different translators to get the best results, and then using common sense and context to make the most cohesive translation, it's for this reason that I put (rewrite) in the title, as I can not guarantee accuracy.

UPDATE: Alright that's all folks books done. I made the conscious decision to match the French and Chinese translations and put the color pages at the end rather than the beginning due to it containing such a large spoiler, AND since the girl in it doesn't even appear until the very last page of the final chapter.

I'd like to give a special shout out to Tito999 the translator of the French verson, thanks to his editing I was able save some time cleaning.

If anyone notices any typo's or errors please leave a comment or send me a PM and I'll try to fix them as I update the gallery with future chapters.

Finally, Below is a link to my current Bounty for a professional translation, and it's gonna be a pricey one. I'm basically broke and throwing everything I have at it so any help would be greatly appreciated.
[TANA] Roshutsu Collection [English, script only, 278 pages]
https://e-hentai.org/bounty.php?bid=21494

Thank you for attempting it, better than nothing at all, looking forward to the rest

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I like how you tagged it as a rewrite. There are many galleries in here that are machine translated and edited but still manage to fool people. Will 5 star for honesty alone.

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I had no idea it was a machine translation until I read the comments, looks like a job well done to me.

It's certainly better than no translation at all, so thanks for making the effort.

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This story reminds me the time my dad got me a bicycle for a birthday gift. The day after, he tried doing tricks with it and broke that shit in half. He was fat.

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I think buying a sex robot that has ai like a human would unethical and just sad

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Mama-san is the best wife ever <3

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Dude's dad needs to seriously chill or at least learn what gifts are. If he needs a fucktoy that much, get his own and break it, don't get your son one and break that gift.

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good to know that i'm not crazy for thinking how "human" these "robots" are being portrayed by the author

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@Furluge: I'm a bit confused, not really sure what you mean, the bounty is for a completely unrelated manga I'd like to get professionally translated, instead of this book that I'm machine translating myself.

And on the subject of the bounty, I'd like to thank hoigoigoi and kendori for their generous donations, most of my hath comes from the monthly banner contest, so its a very slow trickle. And I'm pouring every credit I make from gallery visits into it, so I'll be uploading additional CG sets and Doujins in the coming weeks to keep that stream flowing.

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Man I wanna see more of the mother

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Reminded me alot of the Robot Rick made to pass the butter. The only reason for them to have those human emotions was to torture them. Or West World. Was expecting some dark turn where they pull the sister off the street and turn her into a sex robot or something.

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Do not apologise for the quality.
It is what it is, and still way better than my usual works.
At least we can read it. And if someone bitching, well, they can go fuck themselves. Make a better one, or shut up.
This is a lots of work, and this dude put the effort in it to make a quite good one.

Base +13, limisgood +9, Gim-Li +10, supremegypsy +6, silv1 +6

Y u do dis ch 3?

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holy shit I did not realize this was from a machine translation. Seems like a lot of work to make it so readable, amazing job.

Base +6, Runedude +8, angostamrun +13, pokey1 +6, MSTallgeese -5, Dracul IV +6

Thank you far all the support, really didn't think the reception would be this kind, MTL's and rewrites don't usually get this warm of a welcome. The process is rather tedious, so it means a lot.
First I gotta run all 3 languages through an OCR, then skim each scan to find any character error/typos the OCR might have produced, the most complicated Kanji can go through without a hitch but somehow う is where it gets constantly confused, and I JUST found out google has a drawing option to find certain characters (I've been using 2 different recognition sites to find the correct Kanji/Hanzi...), after that its running each version through google, deepl, bing, and yandex, while using Jisho for certain definitions, then piecing together each translation to find the most cohesive English sentence structure that matches the context of the scene, then it's on to the typesetting, while doing ALL of this with my non-dominant hand.

With that said, I mean it when I say any and all criticisms are welcome, you learn from your mistakes. So if you see anything, please tell me.

Now with that out of the way, I'd like to thank TheGreyPanther and Mikle3000 for their wonderful recent donations to my bounty, and especially chiakisan for his insanely generious contribution, I thought it would take a year to get anywhere near the top 10, but thanks to all of you it's managed to break the top 5 in less than a month.

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im getting invested in this story now

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The plots thickens. This must be some mess up era if they really are humans.

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Hey, just wanted to say thank you for this translation. I recently upgraded my internet so i should be able to chip in some hath for your bounty from the H@H.

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i lost my boner... but the story is good so its ok

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@tomci12:Appreciate it

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Prob one of the first instances of where i came for the porn but stayed for the plot. This subverts alot of typical hentai cliches, and makes you uncomfortable for accepting them in the first place

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First time seeing this author work.

And hot damn this manga is piece of art.
Give out older manga vibe but the detail is enticing enough.
The story is bold and perfectly according to my taste(sry for being degenerate).

Thank you for the translation. Any english translate is good enough for me.

Base +6, riwamixer99 +12, Comrade Claus +8

People are usually okay with MTLs in hentai as long as you're open about it being MTL.

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The story and art is very good, but i feel sick to the pit of my stomach. I can't fucking take this

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Dude I just came here for the futa tag lol. Kind of annoying spending like an hour and a half reading this whole-ass story just to bust, but once I get past like page 50 I'm in it for the long haul.

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Came for the futa tag like panasane but stayed for the story...I did lose my boner though.

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Charles Bronson went on a revenge fuelled killing spree when his daughter was raped, THIS GUY decided to revolutionize the sex trade industry, we all have our coping mechanisms, and with that I bring this book to a close, from the looks of it I've depressed some of you and entertained the rest, I both thank you for your support, and apologize for any emotional scarring this gave you.

I'd like to thank everyone who's contributed so far to my bounty for a professional translation of some smutty TANA goodness, most recently tomci12 and kendori, and especially Kumouri who basically doubled the hath pot cementing it into the top 5, my game plan to keep that luck going is to start MTLing this book in January
https://e-hentai.org/g/287880/737dca91d7/
It used to have an English translation, but for some reason it vanished off the site years ago, though I'm not sure why, and if anyone saved a copy of it please let me know, otherwise I'll start early next year. In the mean time I have 3 projects I'm hoping to do for December, First is a one-shot chapter from another Kizuki Rei tank, the second is gonna be something from the recent "Unreal Ningen Bokujou" anthology volumes, and I'm waiting on a response for the third which would be a simple tank editing job I could do in about a week, every credit/hath I earn is going to go into building that TANA bounty up. It is my every thing 0_0

Last edited on 21 November 2020, 01:53.

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much like others here i came for the tags and left impacted by the story, though i can't say i followed it super closely. if someone would be so kind, what exactly happened with the colored panels at the end?

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So TBs are actually humans, being raised like cattle and with no human rights, while at the same time having a huge marketing campaign around them that makes society believe they're robots?

Last edited on 21 November 2020, 16:36.

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kinda heavy

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Jesus christ they really need a [bad feels] tag to have for things like this

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So this man, in order to stop sexual violence, turned a sex trafficking into an legitamate industry? And the public believed they were robots just like that? I guess the artist had to take some liberties to make a statement. Even Dolls was more believable. Then again I'm overthinking a hentai manga.

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Fire up the birth machines <3

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Outstanding work! I came to fap, and then I stayed for the story...the author is as fucked-up as talented.

As for the translation, because yes, it's a translation, it's a 5/5.
Don't even belittle yourself calling this a rewrite, it's not fair to the hours spent on it.

You took symbols and words, put them into sentences, took everything the machine gave you, and made the most logical choices based on experience and logic to deliver the final meaning of each bubble.
And that's what a translation is about.

Some people may call themselves bilingual just because they can read in both languages, but if they don't know how to make a story...they end up delivering a crap work.
Even authors can be bad at writing, so bad in fact that the translator is having a hard time making it looks good.

You may have used tools, but that doesn't mean you didn't deliver a proper translation.
Give that man a cookie ! ( ^_^)

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Hi. First, sorry for my poor english.
If you'll kindly excuse me, can i ask you one question?
I'm korean translator and i've always wanted to translate kizuki rei's manga. But as you know, he use very unique handwriting(or fonts), sometimes screentone in the fonts. So it's hard to select similar something.
But your work really awesome. For example, "AHH" "AHAAHHH" in 39,40 page or moaning in 74-75 page. Is it your handwriting? or made your own fonts?
If you let me know, it will be very helpful to me.
Thanks.

Last edited on 23 November 2020, 05:24.

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@ongirl: For 39-40 those are actually straight from the raw the artist drew them, as for 74-75 I used the font "Edo Regular"

@AininChase: I originally thought it was Shizuka after being kidnapped, then I realized no beauty mark, no chest number, no inverted nipples, its just some random TB

@terribleperson: The color pages are just the teaser prologue that tanks usually have at the beginning of the book, but considering her pregnancy spoils the "big twist", and that the girl doesn't show up until the very last page I decided to go along with the Chinese and French translations and put it at the very end instead.

Base +18, The14thNoah +11, ikurry +6

I feel like this is probably how the Bene Tleilax started

Base +6, Zoinks +6

"why don't the bad people ever go away?"

(213)

Base +13

I couldn't fap to this, it was just depressing...

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I thought this was gonna be a human-robot love story, but no, it is just fucked up.

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If i got my own doll i'll treat her well. Think of it like owning toys as a kid, don't break em, play with em haha

Base +7, PregnantWhoreFucker +6

This nigga had the gal to buy his son a used onahole, then used it and broke it on him.

Absolute savage.

Base +6, steelgross +8

Okay, okay... Normally, thinking about hentai plots is just silly because they aren't supposed to be taken seriously and don't take themselves that seriously (usually). But here the mangaka is REALLY going out there with trying to have a plot and move it with a message, especially at the end there where it talks about the abundance of information, moral degradation (which is rich considering what you just drew and wrote for the last 200 pages... it's sorta like Pablo Escobar doing an anti-drug PSA while he skis on a mountain of cocaine)...

But how do you keep this a secret? What happens when some sick fuck gets a "True Body" and decides, I dunno, to start hacking it to pieces? That's a lot of blood... And guts... And... nothing robotic. I mean, they specifically go about the robot angle throughout this entire tank except for the guy that works for the company towards the end MENTIONING clones... And everyone before that still calling them "bots" of some description. And what happens when your sexbot starts aging and goes through menopause?

This doesn't even bridge on the idea that this dude was so mentally broken from having his daughter gang raped that he thought the best way to "spare other women that fate" was to... enslave real, actual human beings and force them to breed sex slaves and have them be raped for the rest of their lives. I guess what he REALLY meant was "let other girls be raped so his daughter isn't."

I dunno... Just going this plot heavy and trying to have a message behind it doesn't really work well with this. And it kinda rings hollow when and falls flat when you've spent 200 pages (and including right up until the ending) trying to justify why society is okay with all this when the reasoning for that is rather nonsensical. Personally, I find even ShindoL (who has also been increasingly occupied with including messages with his porn) "Poultry Farm of Chicken Planet" - which was basically the most ridiculous over-the-top condemnation of processed food and slaughter houses I've seen in a while, and DEFINITELY the one with the most dicks in it - to be better at doing that than this because... At least it didn't take itself this seriously and at least the actual writing within the hentai itself wasn't telling you directly (although I don't think anyone could be oblivious enough to miss the message in ShindoL's one-shot) why something is bad.

It's very, very difficult to stimulate someone's dick and brain at the same time. And this is... waaaaaay too hamfisted an attempt at that and just tries to kinda shame you into fapping at it. Which... might sound like it succeeded... until you realize the mangaka just spent the last couple of months drawing 200+ pages of pussies getting raped by a smorgasbord of dicks. Again: it has about as much weight as Pablo Escobar trying to shame you for being a drug addict.

Anyways... Sorry for that wall of text. I just wanted to state why I was disappointed with how the tank played out and how it could have easily been a really good porn with story if done differently.

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The best porn is the kind that leaves you staring in the bathroom mirror for 30 minutes after you finish, wondering where it all went wrong and why you're so fucked up.

I don't think the point was ever the realism or the ethical implications; the point is that we all know this is wrong/bad/offensive to human morality, but there's also a small part in our minds that's going "wow this is hot". This manga just calls attention to that contradiction and makes you feel guilty, and that feeling of taboo is, itself, something a lot of people enjoy.

Base +7, Jas0n +7, biscardone +8

Bladerunner, japan edition.

Base +6, STG-Lugar +6, PregnantWhoreFucker +6

The translator deserves praise. Yes it's a rough work but he had the dedication to use multiple languages and run them through multiple MTLs to get some quality out of it, and that's admirable.

Anyway, this story is harsh. It has its hot moments and Kizuki Rei never fails do deliver savage and intense sex, but seeing people debased in such a way is difficult even if they're wannabe Replicants. It reminds me of that ShindoL story with anthropomorphic cattle.

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I like the story but I'm really not a fan kf the art style

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