My only complaint was that it's too short.

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My only complaint is the lazy-ass "translation" on pages 13 and 14.

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Content is good but the typesetter needed an editor.

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Translator was lazy as fuuuuuuuuuuuck...

Also, should have taken the raw from there, color seems better https://e-hentai.org/g/1655674/0f87d6697d/

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if you post the script for page 13 and 14 I can get someone to properly re-typeset this with better raws

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Lol, don't even get me started.

https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showtopic=68725

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what son of a bitch would draw the best and cutest cunny in the serious as a total ugly bimbo?
fuck him and fuck all you niggas who think its anything good, it is a sin to inappropriately depict pure lolis as this atrocity, and you should feel bad

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Mad pedophiles are the funniest thing.

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lw123789

The worse thing s that Megaton from that page said he was comissioning it and then bam this shit

Godamn I am mad. Loli as titty monster adults doujins are so fucking rare

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if the author would've made her a housewife like Dekosuke's Sakura-san series, this would be even better~~

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@Timroom wait... THAT is a sin ? Not lusting over lolies ? I don't wanna judge but... Really ???
Edit : the comment is gone, but it was someone saying we were all sinners for liking this form of Kuro

Last edited on 30 November 2020, 11:50.

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Oh god, a legal Kuro, kill with with ahegao!
.....
If you don't get it... IT"S A JOKE, one not-loli Illya doujin isn't going to piss me off when we have dozens.

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Page 20 the ultimate tease.

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all those untranslated speech bubbles look really bad

Last edited on 24 April 2021, 20:44.

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