Finally best girl doujin

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Pages are levelled!
Translation seems pretty damn good!

Only thing that's driving me nuts is the lack of punctuation at the end of sentences.
Sure, people can guess what emotion you're trying to elicite from reading the page, but why make them work... "harder" than they all ready are?
Lines like "More I want more" Should be "More! <3 I want more!" "My heart wont stop beating!"

Besides that, really solid job for your first time! Shout outs to best girl!

Base +6, The Inker -8, TheOldDeus +7, Moobortin +1, Broomstick Vilian +7, sleazeball +3, rezarmuk +6

@Moobortin

Your scanlation has two main problems: you're using resampled-sized images instead of the full-size ones, and your files are RGB color instead of Greyscale. From there, your didn't export your files as 32 or 64-color black and white PNGs to reduce filesize. Those 2 problems are common mistakes, but can easily be fixed.

The full-size scans are 1875 x 2719, whereas what you're using is 1280 x 1855, noticeably smaller. There are 3 options for you to source full-size scans. One is in the RAW gallery, there's an option in the upper right corner above "Torrent Download" called "Archive Download". Click on that, then click on "Download Original Archive" (the left button) to get full size scans.
Two is in the RAW gallery, click on "Torrent download", then torrent your full-size scans. The third option is in the RAW gallery (https://e-hentai.org/g/1769806/a2674d45a8/), at the very bottom of the page, there's an option that you click on called "Download original source" to download the full-size image.

The second is converting your scans from RGB color to greyscale, and then exporting the images as greyscale PNGs, in six images from another gallery I commented on:

1.) This file's in RGB color by default, circled in green: https://puu.sh/GQDIS/d06e7b5d38.png
2.) Showing you how to change from RGB color to greyscale: https://puu.sh/GQDNH/2f7cec4ad9.png
3.) Discard color data to change: https://puu.sh/GQDOf/353dee9762.png
4.) Now the file's in greyscale, circled in green: https://puu.sh/GQDQw/e918d2f029.png
5.) Using the export to web option: https://puu.sh/GQDSu/8bc322505f.png
6.) Export settings for 32-color B/W PNGs: https://puu.sh/GQDXR/4e507aad3a.png

Your typesetting has minor issues and you didn't redraw your background textures when you whited them out, but those problems are minor compared to the 2 I mentioned above.
If you want to work on the other issues, here's an editing guide: https://e-hentai.org/g/274869/052c6b9d43/

Last edited on 26 November 2020, 07:30.

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please do gotoubun ichika doujin by the same author

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Other Language
Japanese
Chinese translated by oo君個人漢化
Korean translated by Team Edge
English You are here!

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I hate this franchise. But I'm glad that porn for it came out.
I hate how some of them have Kazuya excluded; as opposed to just changing his character to where he actually, in-real-time gets the pussy.
I'm at a point where I'm using Koikatsu and making a fan story, based on this shit, on my own and posting it on Pixiv.

I hated this shit. It nearly ruined my life. It was on point yet I wanted to punch Reiji in the face for it. And I had to unfriend and distance myself from people who think what Kazuya's going through is "hilarious."

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Shuba shuba shuba shuba

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best girl indeed

Base +7, Aratamari +6

100000 yen for a collar? Shit better be made of solid gold.

Base +8, SeptimustheSeventh +3, y2jkj -6, TheBrojangles +6

Best girl here. At least this version of chadyuza knows how to value her.

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