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[Aiue Oka] Yumemiru Otome Yuugao ~Zenjitsutan~ (Melonbooks Kounyuu Tokuten) [English][cherrybomb]

[愛上陸] 夢見ル乙女 夕顔 ~前日譚~ (メロンブックス購入特典) [英訳]

Manga
Posted:2020-11-26 06:25
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:5.52 MiB
Length:9 pages
Favorited:2031 times
Rating:
433
Average: 4.58

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Posted on 26 November 2020, 06:25 by:   cherrybonbooon    PM
Uploader Comment
Hope you enjoy this short manga of sexy sensei. ;)
Posted on 26 November 2020, 08:14 by:   Lewd Wolfie    PM
Score +0
Thanks for the Translation!!!
Posted on 26 November 2020, 08:18 by:   alex717    PM
Score -14
Can someone ask the creator to make a game based on this fat dude and the teacher!
Posted on 26 November 2020, 08:41 by:   Saberstriker    PM
Score +118
This Seems to be a Prequel to [Aiue Oka] Moonflower From Comic X-Eros #35
Posted on 26 November 2020, 15:34 by:   JuggaloHomie    PM
Score +12
Man I really wish someone would translate that last extra chapter from the Ijirare ~Fukushuu Saimin~ tank too...
Posted on 26 November 2020, 16:17 by:   THDragon    PM
Score +202
UPDATE: cherrybonbooon sent me this PM, which I'll list in its entirety below:
Header: Hi I'm cheeybomb. I read your comment., Today, 13:23

Firstly, thank you for your comment and advises.
I agree with you that my translation is not perfect and high quality even as you said “shitty”, and I just started this few months ago, you putted a lot of effort to wrote that comment, and I actually feel honored.
English is not my first language and the reason I translated Aiue Oka’s work is because one of my friend suggested me to.
I never used machine to translate, that’s one thing I guarantee, just I need to improve my English translating skills and that’s all.
I admit I’m not a fan of any those doujins for male, I mainly read BL doujin.
And about the commission, I offer translations of Japanese to Chinese which is my first and fluent language on another site so I wrote it on the credit.
I’m still not very familiar with e-hentai’s environment so hope you can see me as a baby just started growing up.
I understand that here are a lot of people are very passionate about translation and scanlation’s quality and I will do my best in the future to level it up slowly.
I know you feel offended by my work but I’m also feel that by your rude words on the page that everyone can see it.
It’s not like I don’t care about my translation, I do need people like you to point out my mistakes and things that I can make them better.

Anyways thank you for your lesson and I hope this can explain your questions and confusions.
Feel free to message me anytime. (END OF PM)

Now why didn't you say any part of the above in the first place in the Uploader comment? A little honesty goes a long way in establishing trust with your audience. If you betray your audience's trust, they're going to leave you in droves. Believe it or not, e-hentai is a global community of like-minded people who all want one thing: good hentai.

First off, you need to stop offering JP/CN to EN translations immediately until your English gets a lot better. Imagine if I were a paying customer who commissioned a JP to EN script but instead of getting a clear and concise script with nuance conveyed perfectly, I got this hot mess of a script like this gallery's? I'd feel ripped off, and rightly demand my money back! It'll save everybody a lot of headache in the long run.

I also note that you're serious in wanting to get better. Just posting random galleries with people assuming that everything's all good with them is NOT the way to get better. That's how you get people really angry with you and subsequently, piss of an experienced editor like me, who will tear your work apart and berate you the whole time doing so.

How you get better is by learning the basics and applying them to your work, then once you get more comfortable, you start to expand your boundaries. That's how you get better: through hard work, knowledge, and dedication. If you're missing even one of those things, you're never going to get better no matter how hard you try. There's no shortcuts, and there are no other ways, so don't even ask.

EHCOVE has good listing of editing and translating resources. Please use them: https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showtopic=68725
More specifically, Ero-Otoko's guide to editing and translating: https://e-hentai.org/g/274869/052c6b9d43/

If you're having problems reading any of the above, find a Chinese speaking user who's also fluent in English in this forum: https://forums.e-hentai.org/index.php?showtopic=201268

Again, and I'll impress this onto you, BE HONEST. Say you need help and users will be more than happy to help you out or point out users who can help you, but you have to ask. If you don't ask, you'll never know. Ask questions, keep an open mind, read all those tutorials from EHCOVE and Ero-Otoko, and slowly improve. You can even look up galleries from established scanlation groups like the LWB, RedLantern, Team Koinaka, and White Symphony, see how they edit their works, and apply their fonts to your works.
Last edited on 27 November 2020, 05:11.
Posted on 26 November 2020, 19:40 by:   FO-Bakayarou    PM
Score +13
Aiue Oka is one of my favs. Shame this will probably be expunged like his other translated works.
Posted on 27 November 2020, 01:51 by:   Amauri14    PM
Score +18
Oh nice. I never expected to see this one translated. Don't forget to download it before it gets claimed and expunged.
Posted on 28 November 2020, 04:59 by:   haseo0408    PM
Score +12
Thank you so much!.

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