Hello all...
Boy oh boy did this cost me a lot of $$$ and time.

like a idiot, I had to commissioned this book twice.

See, I originally hired the person who translated the chapter 2 to translate the rest of this book.

later on I met someone with more experience in the translation business.
I was told that the first guy I hired wasn't a very good translator.

I was skeptical at first, but upon receiving the script for chapter 3 I realized the guy was right.
Many of the lines made no sense when read back to back.....
I learned too late, because by then I had already paid the first dude to translate the rest of the book
LOL... Big Mistake.

This chapter was translated by the 2nd guy I hired.
I feel the quality of his work is a lot better than the first.
Those of you who can understand Japanese please let me know if he did a good job.

Also this is my first time doing the editing. I learned, I could save a lot of money if i did the editing myself.
Any constructive criticism is appreciated. I used comic sans MS font because i didn't know which font to use.
if you know of a better font for this please let me know!

Ps: Chapter 4 will be coming out in a few days. After I recover from my burn out from editing this
(clip studio sucks... The preference option that allows you to change the default font is bugged..
i had to change every bubble to comic sans manually...fml.)

wtf,,,,for some reason this shows up on e-hentai but not sad panda....i cant find it on the ex version's search bar at all..

edit. nvm it worked!

Last edited on 03 December 2020, 12:00.

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Will you redo chapter 2 with your new translator?
Thanks.

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@ kinoshita_tokichiro
yes. but after i do the rest of this book first.

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Can't wait for the whole book to be translated, and more from this artist.

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thanks for the hard work!
you can go look into the Cove of Scanlators forum here if you want to search for font recommendations.

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Please never use comic sans ever again. Its reputation is burned for all eternity plus 1000 years.

Better free fonts are Komika, Anime Ace, Wurmics Bravo, Wurper Comics you can download them on sites like dafont.com. If you're not afraid of registrating youn also pay blambot.com a visit and search through their free fonts.

And if clip studio sucks to much for you, download GIMP at gimp.org. It's free. And as a GIMP user I can assure you don't have to change the font for each bubble manualy.

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@Ancient-Alien
hey man thanks alot.

I found your post too late....i already did chapter 4 with comic sans...i will use your recommendations when i do the rest of the chapters.

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and here... we.... go!

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