https://www.pixiv.net/en/artworks/86068547

There are too many things wrong with this.

The CG art style is a bit lazy, but it could be forgiven if other things were on point.
The plot is lazy, simple. The plot needs to drive the story a bit more if CG art is used, this barely has a plot.
The translation is horrible.
The clothes are never removed. I've seen this before, hope it doesn't become a trend to replace censoring, so bad.

I gave this 0.5 stars. Let's say the half star is because I believe something much better could come out of someone who can draw like this. This isn't it.

Base +10

I like the IDEA this has of male protag desires the ntr and makes it happen.

so as much as i wanna give props, yeeeeaa... this is bad. but please practice and improve! put more time and effort.

1 star ...

Base +6