sorry if the translation is not good, this is the first time i'm translating and i have zero idea about Chinese languege! bubt this is such a masterpiece that i just couldn't help myself!

thanks to Yagami Shuuichi for his amazing works (ijust hope he doesn't mind my translation)

several questions arise in response...

1. if you don't know chinese, do you know any japanese? if not, why didn't you just MTL the japanese? better to have an MTL from the original than from a translation; this is true whether it's a machine or a human doing the translating.
2. why not just ask around for groups willing to do an actual translation? whether for cash or out of the goodness of their hearts, there must be some group out there willing to give this a shot. as low as the chances are of getting something translated nowadays, releasing a shitty MTL is only ever going to decrease the odds of an actual translation happening. if you really think this manga is a masterpiece then you should want it to get a proper translation and typesetting, no? but instead now you've simply associated this manga/artist with a barely readable MTL, entirely contrary to your stated intention.

just something to think about.

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He wanted something done that no one was doing so he did it himself. I respect that.

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If only "respect" would cause more quality translations to appear. @EternalBankay

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KuroXIII is right. If you're going to translate something, it's much better to use the original source rather than one that's been translated into a second language.

When you translate Japanese into Chinese, for example, a little bit of the original meaning often gets lost in the translation. Then, when you translate that Chinese translation into English, a bit more may get misinterpreted, and the final result will likely be even further away from the orignal Japanese meaning.

It's like that kid's game called "Telephone", where kids stand in a line and have a sentence verbally passed on from one kid to the next. As the phrase is passed from person to person, it tends to lose its original structure, and sometimes unrelated words are added in by mistake. By the time it reaches the end of the line, the phrase is completely different from that of the original.

Now if the Chinese version is the only one that was available to work with, then there's nothing you can do about that. But if the Japanese raw is available, that should've been your first choice.

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guys it seems like there is a misunderstanding here,there is no Japanese source, only Chinese is available and the manga is 2 years old, nobody ever planned to translate this, "KuroXIII" is just wrong NOBODY will translate a manga for you freely, my guess is he is upset somebody is doing his job for him
and lastly if you really can't stand the translation don't read it (that's why i warned you) or do it yourself, this is a hentai not "Macbeth"! take it easy :)

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no one would translate things for free? there are at least hundreds of uploads on this website that contradict this statement. I am not a translator. I could honestly care less about this particular upload, or this artist, since neither appeal to me.

also, what about actually paying a group, like I originally said? If you really like the story then you should be willing to put your money where your mouth is - as I, among many others - have commissioned groups to do in the past.

best practices are best practices for a reason. get your head out of your ass.

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COMIC ペンギンクラブ山賊版 2019年5月号 p64 @JohanViliebert

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@JohanViliebert:

uzaidi was kind enough to provide the Japanese source for this manga. Here's a direct link to the story, in case you'd like to try checking it out:

https://e-hentai.org/s/5d9bc312fe/1402148-64

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lol "KuroXIII " is truly triggered that instead of paying him i did the job myself, my guess was right he is just angry i didn't pay him, well i kinda have bad news for you, i'm actually in the middle of translating the rest of the manga
i had to search the word "Kanrichuu no Sore o Shibatte Agetai" and it never showed any Japanese version of it, both on hitomi and this site but i'll use "COMIC ペンギンクラブ山賊版 2019年5月号 p64" for
translating the rest (thanks for giving the source)

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It's not bad at all, the translation is good and it makes sense. Maybe the lettering could be improved. By the way, thanks for doing this! The story is indeed very nice :-)

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i'm really happy you found it enjoyable, i'll definitely work on lettering for future uploads

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A translation of a translation should never be acceptable unless the original source material (i.e. the raw) is unavailable.

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