Added a few things to my original post. As stated before, critique and review are appreciated.

It's great for your try! I don't have particuliar critique to give, but I can assure you I'd like you to continue!

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I would say that the breasts are well made, but that the young lady's thighs are too big, the bottom is badly done on page 18 in particular, and the panties are also not very well made, the contact on the character could also be better (like page 14, it looks like her finger is part of the lady's body). otherwise the work is good I encourage the continuation, we could also have better facial expression (already not bad) and maybe a little text to express the feelings of the characters and story. gg again live the continuation , maybe new characters incoming could be fun , oshako shrunked <3 héhé.

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Are you alive ? ^^'

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