I could stare at that rack all day.

I wanted to work on this one for quite some time, and seeing a bunch of other Itou Yuuji stuff pop up inspired me to finally get it done. I'm a fan of this guy's prose, so I hope I managed to do it at least a little justice.
This is also my first try at levelling, so I'm also hoping I didn't mess it up too much. The filesize went up quite a bit so maybe I did. I don't know these things man I'm just a translator.

Translator note: Page 3 is written in a way that's very reminiscent (i.e. copied) from a very famous Japanese novel, hence Koakuma's comment on it on page 4. I used the first translation of it I could find on Google as the basis for my version, so hopefully it gets across. As for what novel it is, I'll leave it as an exercise for the reader.

Everything's done by me. Feel free to point out any mistakes. I'll fix them if they're major enough.

Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/867004/5ebc061688/

12/12/2020 - Updated with some suggestions from MC Arisato. Thanks a lot!

Patchouli is the cutest.
And cum don't taste that bad most of the time, its just hard to shallow, imo.

Thanks for the translation.

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Wow, this one was a really fun read with lots of personality. Thanks for translating it!

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I need more of these two.

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Finally, some good shit.

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Another Yuuji! And good work spotting the Souseki novel. That bit might have gone over my head, honestly. I love what you've done to the narration and it really gives the whole work a lot of character.
I'm primarily a translator too and not an expert on editing, but the leveling looks solid to me. There's a bit of bleed through on the top half of page 15 and I'd probably clean that manually, but everything else looks good.
I noticed that the moans on page 7 were edited out, but not replaced, though.

I'm the guy who's been doing Itou Yuuji stuff recently, so if you're planning on doing some more, we could co-ordinate so we don't snipe each other by accident, and maybe even share notes? Shoot me a Twitter or Discord DM at (edited) if you'd be interested, please!
Beyond that I've got a list of suggestions for this work that I could send you there too. A fair bit of them are nitpicks so I don't want to mess up the comments with them too much, the only really big one would be on Page 3, Panel 5. "Lose herself *in* its pages" should be the proper phrase.

Last edited on 19 May 2021, 20:46.

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@ezequiell pineapples for life

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yooooo, this is adorable

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the pace and commentary in this is great. the translation does a lot of good work, too.

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@Iceandele straight up, you did an incredible job with this translation. I've seen plenty of subpar translations lately, and this was truly a breath of fresh air by comparison. It could've been translated by someone much worse and then we'd just be stuck with that translation, but instead, we got great art paired with a great translation. Frankly, I'd like to *thank* you for this. I really hope we get more futa doujin translations from you in the future.

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Great art, rock solid translation, very good stuff.
What novel was being parodied one page 3?

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Yesssss the raw was too complicated for me to decipher so this translation is mucho appreciated. Its even better than I imagined!

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It's hard to fap to this guy's works.
Everything is so darn cute and sweet.
The sexiness is there, but the saccharinity...
It's still very nice and funny to read!
Thanks SO much, Iceandele!

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*Major hype as third translator joins the Itou Yuuji appreciation festival*
What an amazing sight. Translators flashmobs on artists need to be a thing. Thank you all for this.

I also agree with the praise on the TL. Beautiful phrasing and wording with lots of thought/work behind, though it even makes the raw look more plain at times lol.
Am I wrong in saying that Koakuma's thought bubbles ending with (の)パチュリー様 or 様子 is similar to descriptions you'd see in artbooks or photo albums? Or is Koakuma using an actual speech style there? The former would make sense for an observation report. Like "Here's Patchouli-sama doing this or that.", which gives off the feeling the doujin sort of works like an expressions chart.
Just curious. It would be hard to convey in the TL without conflicting with the narration anyway.
A bit bummed that Rumia's catchphrase on p.15 couldn't carry through also, but what can you do.

Last edited on 10 December 2020, 11:24.

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Sweet, thanks. I hope someone does that Suika/Shinmyoumaru one as well

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Someone remind me why futa on female isn't a tag again?

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@hujkl I guess the assumption was that it is the "default", but that is sadly not true anymore. Sites that actually use that tag are exceedingly rare. Instead we are forced to dig through the pile with a blindfold.

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Typo on last page: "sutff"

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@KikiKanri
Protip, if you put a " - " sign in front of a tag while searching, it excludes galleries with that tag. Works on a lot of sites, like Google. You can exclude a word by putting a " - " in front of the word, no space.
You can also include multi-word tags in a search by using " _ " instead of spaces. Alternatively, putting the tag in quotations work too.

So, with those two operators in mind, you can hide 'dickgirl on male/male on dickgirl' galleries by inputting -dickgirl_on_male OR -"dickgirl on male"

Or just copy and paste this and bookmark the search or something:
Futanari -male_on_dickgirl -dickgirl_on_male
Futanari -"male on dickgirl" -"dickgirl on male"

Oooor you could just, ya know, go into the settings and filter that tag out. Unless you do want to see those tags but I don't think you guys do.
Useful when you want to exclude a tag from a search but not forever though cause it's less off a hassle than continuously going in and out of the settings everytime. It's not a hassle at all in fact, especially if you have your search history saved

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Legit hard to have a mindless, carnal fap to this, but for good reasons - not bad!

The story's just really touching, sweet and compassionate; genuinely loving and care being taken. Its adorable and kinky in a compassionate, caring way where you want to dote on, care for and properly savor and share the moment together with your lover.

The heart inside me is moved, the caveman unga bunga side of me was repressed. Wasn't expecting to fap to a genuine love-making scene today

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